All Comments on 'Forbidden Love'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
ummmmm?

Great start. But why is he forbidden? Who is he? Etc.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Why forbidden?

Is he a stranger? or someone she knows? why did she succumb so easily? is he related to her? Is he her boss? Requires a second chapter to at least close the title and the description..

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