All Comments on 'Forbidden Love'

And poorly written!

It's not erotic, it's not incest (you didn't identify him, could have been husband, boyfriend, rapist, who kows?), it wasn't interesting.

Congratulations on a massive fail.

beautifully written. powerful. passionate. primal. loved it.

Wow you wrote a whole chapter. Finish the story then publish it.

A sex scene. I guess as long as it got the author off....

I think is a incest story, between mother an son. I liked, not explicit sex, but sexy story.

Only one think, is very short tale.

Maybe you want a write a sequel?

4* for you.

I liked the raw intensity of it. The animalistic coupling was hot. I also liked the mother's day twist at the end, heavily implying (without explicitly saying) that they are mother and son. Nice tease! The less is more style resonates with me, sometimes. By the way, if I were you, I'd ignore negative comments from Anonymous. Those who can't create always seek to destroy!

13 fuqqing paragraphs?

????????? What!