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He looked right at her and held her again as he spoke, this time with as much conviction as he could muster said. "I need you, you will never know how much, mother".
I need your pussy, mouth, and ass on my dick twenty four-seven.
He mentally counted to ten and the words he knew she needed to hear came to mind, "I love you Mother, and we need some time together to get to know each other again. I have an idea. If you buy the drinks tonight, and instead of me going into work I can order some Chinese, and we can spend time bonding over a game of backgammon together".
He pointed at the television and then motioned with his hands "No judgments made here but you need to turn off my porn, get properly dressed, and put up your toys so we can enjoy that".
He knew she was mentally admonishing herself for being caught. The color of her embarrassment looked a sunburned shade on her. It was a scintillating feeling for him to put her through this humiliation after what she had made him suffer. Without really trying he had so effectively knocked her off her pedestal with her help. This was so much better than when he just slapped her.
This is the perfect start to the night.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 7 years agoI agree ... good plot and generally good writing, though there are a few language errors that, if corrected would improve the reading a bit ... find a good editor (every author needs one!).
Anonymousabout 7 years ago"Gerald Torrez gazed at the prone female form laying sprawled out naked before him." Redundancies. Would be better as, "Gerald Torrez gazed at the female form sprawled out naked in front of him." More words are not always better, especially when most of them mean the same thing. And it's "lying", not "laying."
You have a lot of bizarre phrasing and missing punctuation. I suggest finding an editor.
You need to put this in "Incest" or at least warn of it at the beginning. Many people have a strong dislike for incest and don't want to read it.
Anonymousabout 7 years agoGood plot. Burns it up in that first gangbang scene. Though it seems you rush through some of your later scenes. Slow it down.
