All Comments on 'Forced Awakening'

you should post your stories on non human

thay will be better apreciated

The "paranormal erotica" vampire/werewolf thing has completely taken over the Non-Human section, that is where your audience is. :) (Although vampire and werewolf erotica used to show up in "Erotic Horror" back in the day..ehhh, but that was before Twilight and the nerfing of those particular monsters. They got kicked out by the more staunch Horror fans.)

The Sci-Fi/Fantasy crowd on Lit tends to prefer the exploration of other worlds and settings. If you can't take us somewhere else other than the modern day, the story probably isn't well suited for this category.

I like this, I want more, please.