All Comments on 'Forced Ch. 09'

I love this series. It's brilliant and this story is really good. Keep writing and give me more.

Need more chapters, I have to know what was going through Scott's mind when Jason gave his name a Jay Scott when you wrote:

Tell him Jay Scott from earlier today," I said calmly to Scott. He looked down at me dumbfounded.

Looking over to Scott I asked what time it was. No response. He was staring at me in a daze.

I love this story and hope Jason gets his memory back before Scott shows up with his bags. They need to be together!

Sadly I know this series has not been continued for years but I really want to know what happens next after Scott leaves. I love this series and I hope you write again. I need closure.

This series is GREAT! this is my favorite chapter. The one thing i do not like is you left us hanging at the end of this series. Does his wife ever find out? What happened to scott? An also. Can you continue the version of scotts perspective? No offense but you kind of left us all hanging.

The story literally descends into chaos starting with this chapter. Nothing makes any sense - it's like a surreal French countercultural movie. And it's fairly grotesque. The last two chapters pretty much completely ruin an interesting story.

i like this chapter and i am loving this story so far, unlike som people o-o they didnt pay attention enough, makes perfect sense btw :] very gud writing

Sounds like somebody should be jailed for rape. Those two abused him cost in life and death and hurt him.

I would write this type of story about a wife who abuses her gentle husband and hurts him.

He gets hurt and abused, but she gets put in jail, and he gets away from her.

Lost me when he defecated over him. Not willing to continue further