All Comments on 'Forced Ch. 13'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

love this series! keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

I will be interested how Jason is going to handle his new sexual identity, especially since he is a family man. Once the sex has settled down, will he feel guilt or freedom.

canndcanndabout 10 years ago

I assume that was Scott who came to him and said goodbye. I feel badly for him. I wonder if he knows that Jason has accepted this new sexual identity? Last he talked to him, Jason was in shock and had amnesia and his denials and comments hurt Scott. I do think the one thing you haven't stayed true to is that he loves his wife whether or not he decides he's bi, gay or whatever. I don't think he'd be screwing all these guys and risking disease for her sake if not his own. That is a detail that I'd think would carry through being that his concerns when he slept with Scott is was led to his meeting Doc and Tom. Looking forward to more.

LolaBellaLolaBellaalmost 10 years ago
Wrong Direction

I'm not crazy with the direction this story has taken. This series was a total turn-on, and I've re-read it multiple times. I was so excited to see new chapters. However... Jason was a nice guy with a family. Having him return home to juggle a family & deal with Scott daily in the office would be much more erotic. This "gay sex orgy" isn't sexy. I just scanned this last installment because it doesn't have the heat or sensuality from before.

tendermentstendermentsalmost 10 years ago
A bit disappointed

I thought he actually loved Scott is what you were going for... How the fuck does he end up being taken advantage of by a doctor... Scott clearly had feelings for him he would never leave him like tht on someone else's doorstep ... Seriously you need a retraction ... This is getting shitty... I like the sex and stuff still but.... The direction is turning me off

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Really enjoying this story and am so happy you have picked it up again. I sure hope there will be further instalments as I am extremely curious as to how this situation with his family and his job (along with his relations with Scott) will be resolved. Thanks for a great read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Pleaseee

Its the fisrt time I comment in this website, because I really need to know what happend whit Jason and Scott!! update this story pleaseeeee

MilkChocolateAmazonMilkChocolateAmazonabout 9 years ago
Hmmmmmm

I agree with lolabella and tenderments, this story was amazing up until the last couple of chapters. This weird sluttiness seems a very random turn of events. Juggling Scott with his family life would be a much more interesting and dimensional story than the typical gay orgy thing which comes across slightly vacuous and is not particularly a turn on at all.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Done.....

This story started out ok and had potential to be very good, and then it just turned to trashy stupid! I kept hoping that the next chapter would redeem the previous one and so on...but none the less, this was a complete and uttter failure for me! Good luck on better writing...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
dissapointed

this is my first time commenting...

i feel utterly cheated of what was potentially among the best stories on ths site untill u decided to kill it with nonsense and bullshit...this man declared his love for scott then u decide to introduce 4 other men ....!? scott disappears from the picture ...jason is now a slut......uuuuurghhh

u totally killed this story...im so pissed i wasted a day reading this trash....i will not fall fr ur literary madness again...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Continue please

I love this story, please continue, I need to know what happens with Scotty and what about his wife? The only thing I didn't like was the concussion and amnesia, but the rest was great!

OnimpulseOnimpulseover 8 years ago
YUCK!!

I must agree with a lot of the other readers...this was bad writing, mindless, sort of like an old bad porn movie script!! It started out great and then just got worst and worst as we hoped against hope that subsequent chapters would soon get better...they didn't and this was a complete waste of time...plz don't quit your day job...because writing is not your forte!!!

sisselsisselover 8 years ago
very good and so erotic

I've just finished this story and loved it. I wish for a new encounter with Scott and many other chapters. You are really talented and it's worth being published. I' m gonna read your other stories. keep it up :)

bk3rdbk3rdover 7 years ago
Gave it a 5

even though it did take an unexpected direction. Scott would not have abandoned (?) Jason w/ Doc and Tom. How will U reconcile this, Jason's work and family life? Tremendous opportunity to work out a complex situation. Looking forward to next (several?) chapter(s).

JP0920JP0920over 7 years ago

this story is so hot you should finish it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
where do you go from here??

How are you going to reconcil jason's family and business life? you seem to have built a story that isn't going to end well

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Where is the end?

Did he see is boss and Marcus again? Did he tell his wife, are they still married, what about Tom and Doc, did him and Alex get together? We need more please.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
No more?

What happens next?

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
No more?

Do you plan on writing more? Please say yes.

I would love a sequence on what happen with Jason and Scott at the office.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great story

Really hope you continue this! One hell of a hot read

buzzie1969buzzie1969over 3 years ago
hot

hot story! Hope you write more

VirgoRN917VirgoRN917over 3 years ago
Excellent

I really hope that you continue this series. It is one of the best written that I've come across. Interested to know what happens between Scott and Jason, also Jason and his wife.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

What’s next? Fantastic story, hope you continue it.

GaiusErosGaiusErosover 3 years ago

Jay and Scotty need closure...

Not so subtle way of saying, "Please, sir. may we 'ave some more???"

GaiusErosGaiusErosover 3 years ago

Seriously... Does what happens in Vegas stay in Vegas? Or does Jay embrace the other side of his nature? Does he have to closet it with his wife on the down-low? Or does he close the door and return to being a just closeted drone with fond memories and a rare smile his wife never understands...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Great story I keep checking to see if you've written more, I live in hope

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

You can't leave us hanging !!!!! Please finish. Love the story

Lovesex53Lovesex53over 2 years ago

Great story, it's a dream to have a boss like this, life full of fun and adventure

OzeminotaurOzeminotaurover 2 years ago

I hope more is coming as he has to seat down and deal with who he is gay or bi and what he does about his wife and kids does he break her by coming out to after his time in vagus or does he keep quite

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

What happened to the sequel?

SpookyhstSpookyhstover 1 year ago

Please please continue this story, I hope he gets back with Scott, they were the best ;)

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