by capn_doggy
cant wait to read what else you come out with, but i hope you dont take too long getting back to lexi and syd, im really loving thier story so far
This story line is good. I mean it's REALLY good. You add some more depth to your characters and maybe a good backstory, this could be a great novel. Or series of novels. I read this once and I couldn't stop reading it. I read it a second time to be sure I didn't miss anything. There is serious potential here.
Absolutely loving the story so far. I like how its not just a cut and paste mythos, but rather something new that you are introducing. The sex is pretty hot too. I am eagerly awaiting more.
I don't read many things twice let alone any more than that but this story pulls me right back everytime just to see if I missed something please continue can't wait to see more
This is very well written, the characters are interesting and deep enough that they seem real, as opposed to the often 2D characters many stories on here end up with. The mythos to my knowledge is new and original, and makes me want to learn more about this world.
Just had my third read through
I also liked your other stories but this is by far my favourite
Awesome story, truly enjoyed it, can't wait to see what happens next, please continue writing it. Thank you for your time and generosity in sharing it.
love the verbal back n forth humor between characters