All Comments on 'Forced Changes Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

cant wait to read what else you come out with, but i hope you dont take too long getting back to lexi and syd, im really loving thier story so far

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
GO ON! GO ON! GO ON!

PLEEEAAAAASSE. Love this story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Can't wait for more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

This story line is good. I mean it's REALLY good. You add some more depth to your characters and maybe a good backstory, this could be a great novel. Or series of novels. I read this once and I couldn't stop reading it. I read it a second time to be sure I didn't miss anything. There is serious potential here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
More

I do hope you come back to this, I love it

AnubismarkAnubismarkover 7 years ago
Loving it.

Absolutely loving the story so far. I like how its not just a cut and paste mythos, but rather something new that you are introducing. The sex is pretty hot too. I am eagerly awaiting more.

jjsnypejjsnypeover 7 years ago
amazing

I don't read many things twice let alone any more than that but this story pulls me right back everytime just to see if I missed something please continue can't wait to see more

DarthpimpDarthpimpover 7 years ago
Intriguing

This is very well written, the characters are interesting and deep enough that they seem real, as opposed to the often 2D characters many stories on here end up with. The mythos to my knowledge is new and original, and makes me want to learn more about this world.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Just had my third read through

I also liked your other stories but this is by far my favourite

Jkwar91Jkwar91about 7 years ago

Awesome story, truly enjoyed it, can't wait to see what happens next, please continue writing it. Thank you for your time and generosity in sharing it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
I loved it

this was THE best story I have read here. please keep writing

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
great character portrayals

love the verbal back n forth humor between characters

GhostWraithGhostWraithover 4 years ago
Fun read

Keep them coming ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This series was the biggest factor in me realizing I’m trans.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

omg, they watched chuck. Sorry, just came here to say that it's a great show

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