All Comments on 'Forced Slutty Transformation Ch. 01'

by beachboi_3

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
short

too short.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Exciting

Well written. I just hope it doesn't get too dark. Can't wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Watching for more!

Nice setup--now show us what happens!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Yeah, a little unbelievable or he must be really spineless - simply go to the next town over or the closest big town and have it removed. Or blame a mad ex-girlfriend. Easy.

I know it's for the story, but it's a bit ridiculous....

JasonClearwaterJasonClearwateralmost 7 years ago
Your writing deserves a better score than you've got

Keep writing. It's good! Keen to see where you go with it. Ignore anyone who questions the plot of a fantasy story on an erotica site. ;-)

Jase.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Good story.... but did he have to pee during any of this time?

63lsmith63lsmithalmost 7 years ago
NICE

Just did not like the cage part, I think it distracts from the real story.

Rwa4768Rwa4768over 5 years ago
Good start

Good build up, I can't wait to see where this goes.

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