All Comments on 'Forced to Change Ch. 15'

You need a lot of practice writing. You have ideas, but you can't structure your language.

What a stupid, stupid heroine. I hate it when authors feel they have to write "strong" female leads, only to create annoying characters who are boorish and combative. It often times comes off as forced and meaningless. Jared is supposed to be a trained, hardened killer and yet he's appearing quite weak and spineless next to her. Katie's behavior seems very over the top and extremely unnecessary. Her character was likeable in the beginning but now she's coming off as erratic and really strange and as a result unrelatable. I hope there's some redeeming qualities to come but it's looking pretty bleak.