All Comments on 'Forced to Sex Again'

I've read YouTube comments that were more coherent.

that the author isn't a native English speaker. Yikes.

Great ending... But not worth scoring or reading.

Just another B.T.B story that is horrible.How can anyone enjoy a story like this is beyond belief..

It look as if the author got tired in the middle of the story and couldn't finish.

The exit scene should've been enhanced, specially on the preparation of the camera and the collection of his belongings prior to his home departure, and TheKeith should have made a parallel story, showing the husband having the time of his life away from the bitch.

And of course, he should have looked for a better ending (I'm not gonna say which), one with a good twist

Could've been a *5*.

It wasn't

Sbrooks, the leading commenter in Literotica history, was going to give this barely-literate author and this barely-readable story a FOUR out of five for no other reason than "the extreme BTB on the stupid, slut bitch", but dropped to a three (still average!) because the husband also died.

Please, sbrooks, tell us again how the scores here really do reflect the quality of the story. Tell us again how you're not nothing more than a BTB cheerleader, and that you appreciate well-constructed and well-written stories from all genres.

Swingerjoe, commenting as anonymous again.

A story from a little whore house in Texas???

I think you should take that energy and imagination and apply it to developing a more coherent and compelling plot. This was just a cartoon. Was that your goal?

Why did the husband have to die? He deserved to get away from that devil.

Pointless.

dumb cuck shit.

Kind of slow, kind of pointless and boring. I thought your dry tone might have been intentional. There were some moments like the letter from her church that rose above the rest.

Practice, practice , practice!

illiterate cuck shit.

first glorifications of drug induced rape now this. just go back to pornhub

another cocksucking WIMP posting dumb cuck SHIT.

....but you brought it on with this story.

Just...stop, please.

What a lame end. Poof! They're dead.

Story idea is interesting, but overall writing is a bit rough/unfinished. Could have used a good but of editing.

Sorry, but I can only give it 2-stars.

I do wonder what your stories on this topic would be like. I'd be pleased to read whatever literary creations you can write on this or a similar topic, under your own screen names ... actual writing and publishing being so much more difficult than criticizing. As I don't comment much, you're safe from my vented spleen. Go to it!

another cocksucking WIMP posting DUMB cuck SHIT.

This was a sex-themed story. For those who still want wall-to-wall ultra-graphic sex on every page, I ask that you get a life. For those who are easily offended because I didn’t write exactly what you wanted to read, I’ll say the same thing. I also observe that the people expressing the worst, nasty, most virulent comments have—with few exceptions—either posted as anonymous or have never published a story under their screen names. Reading such comments is pointless.

What was point? A woman have super human amounts of sex and yelling at husband. Husband does nothing for a signifigamt period of time, and then takes off. Wife feels btb of absurd levels, and then they die in ramdom traffic acciedent?

ly?

What was the purpose of this story? By coincidence they both get in a wreck with each other and die? Why?

Never fails to deliver, never fails to go over the top.

You want that much sex? You deserve your punishment.

She kept reading and re-reading the letter from her conservative church, detailing a meeting of the full church elders, who'd ex-communicated her over 'serial immoral behavior and deliberately spreading disease, including to the pastor and two deacons, recently fired from their positions.'

*including the pastor*

ha!

Worst story I ever read

Hopefully the author of this sham of a story was one of the occupants in the RVs! Terrible writing and plot

Now that would be a great story to tell about. Two Rvs bumping and crashing around the city like a County Fairs Derby