All Comments on 'Forced to Whore in Mexico Ch. 15'

I realy wanna see Lexi introduced to her neighbour and other customers. Very exciting story:)

I can't wait for the next part. Maybe you can have Lexi visit a doctor for body modification, tattoos piercings. Have them kidnap her mother and have Lexi help train her. Just some thoughts. keep up the great work I love the story! Thanks

Very nice story so far, please tell us how Lexi will continue her slow descent to becoming a willing used whore, and will she be pierced and tatooed as such by Suzan ?

Sent it to an editor and reduced it to maybe 5 chapters. It's like a long run on sentence.

Please continue. You've hit on one of my favorites - - tits made to sag! The birth control's failing might go a long way in assisting this. :-) Thanks for a great story.

This story is very awesome and you are really talented and describe every character in a good way please dont stop .I think there are alot of fans here

Seriously.... finish the story already. It's been like..years.

I receive letters and comments that say to write faster and others that tell me they like the slow pace. I can't please everyone. Please understand that I am not a professional writer and I have an everyday job, just like most of you. Creative writing does not come easily to me but I am seriously trying to do a good job with this stuff.

Write at your own pace, it is a very good story. Keep up the good story Don't worry what people say.

Just wanted to say I just found your story and love it. Definitely enjoying Susan getting off humiliating Lexi. So many possibilities to see lexi slowly being turned into a Mexican whore.

Or mystery guest her savior and tickett out ofMexico.

Love your story and you surely got talent. Thats proven by all the comments you obviously got btw ;) Im so looking forward to Lexi being forced to take on her customers and would not like the story brake away from the noncon-style. That said plz continue in your own tempo, this is nice stuff...

People should stop writing you to complain. A thank you would be a more apropriate message.

Please hurry up and add more chapters you got a lot of fans here and I think most of them are waiting your story

Great story, I can't wait for the next part! This is the best story I have read. Thanks again for the story!

Really looking forward to the day Lexi meets the neighbour and her reaction..

So curious what Lexi will get to experience with the neighbour and all the way until that magic day..

Keep up the good writing.. A really capturing story!

Great story, I can't wait for the next part! Keep up the great job!

you have 16 to get her cocked are I am out... you half the store over and over and over please do whole chapter not half pages !

Anyone complaining needs to remember the author is writing this for FREE. Most of us are appreciative.

I appreciate the patience and understanding of many of you. I am doing the best I can. It may be a half page here, but it is 4-5 pages on my computer's Word software. I am not writing just to fill the pages. If it isn't fast or long enough, that is fair. You have so many choices here. I am lucky to have more than an hour or two a week to actually sit down and write. That is where I am.

That's okay. Most of us are satisfied and appreciative. Thank you!

when do get the next episode

I will submit it within 2 weeks.

Its been longer than 2 weeks!?!?!?

... there is three weeks passed out... already since 09.09 ... :)

I was out of town for a family emergency. Things are better now. I have to quit giving timelines when it is obvious to everyone that I don't keep them very well. Big time apologies to all. I have the story fleshed out and I am moving forward on it. No more broken promises from me.

Rather than stalling, just stop the story already. Maybe it is your conscious holding you back? The story, even if it is fiction, is down right sick. I am sure you have provided people who get off on this enough wanking material as it is. Your services are no longer required, have a nice and decent life.

You are a very talented writer, Writing is difficult and takes time. We are just impatient because the story is very good! I can't wait to see what happens next. Please keep writing!

The story is very good. I can't wait for the next part. Please keep up the great work! Thanks again.

Who goes on and reads erotic stories, criticizes others for reading them too, and then has the nerve to say others should get a life? Wow.

As for the story, most of your readers are quite patient. Thank you and take your time.

I have recently received several emails telling me how disgusting my writing is and that I should stop, get a life, jump off a bridge, etc. Having an imagination and expressing our dark thoughts through fantasy writing is wrong and sick according to them. I did seriously consider just mailing in a quick ending where Lexi is rescued, the bad guys are caught and then leaving Literotica. I am not thick skinned and the criticism cut deeply and has affected my desire to continue. I am still writing and I will decide when and how to finish this story in my own time. For those of you who have continued to encourage me, thank you.

ignore those jerks fyrehart, haters are gona hate.

am eagerly waiting for the next chapter !

i check the page daily actually ;)

The vast majority of your readers can wait and really appreciate your skill. Fantasy is harmless. i would be willing to wait years to see this end right. I'm not eager to see a quick end. Please ignore the idiots!

Hooray! Lexi will stay a virgin!

I totally appreciate that you have a day job and that you are not a professional writer; however, I can't wait to see Lexi's journey continue!! I want you to work at a pace comfortable for you, and I want you to feel encouraged...just know that you have devoted fans who check in regularly and will be ecstatic when the next chapter is released!

Those guys are jerks, dont listen to them.

On a separate note, is anyone else reading these hoping that by the end lexi is just like susan. That'd actually make a great epilogue, a flash forward years later with lexi taking on susans role with a new "recruit"

I agree. Would definitely like to see Lexi become like susan. But hopefully not soon. I don't mind you taking 5 years to finish this. Fyrehart is the best writer on literotica by far.

liking this story does make me feel a bit guilty I will admit but I do like it. Girls like Lexi were mean to me in my school days so this helps me vent some of that frustration. Personally I'd like to see one of the boys from her school days, one she was mean too, come to the brothel and get the chance to fuck her like a whore.

I hope you continue this and Lexi never escapes.

Hope next part come up soon! I really love this story and i check in to see if next part has come.. Hope Lexi has to go thru alot of deprivating things and so.

The more the merrier IF I say so :-)

Keep on writing Fyrehart! :-)

I have decided that the story will continue. Your letters and comments helped a lot...;)

You have a good talent and I think you have alof of fans so dont stop .alot of people are waiting your chapters

Yay! If anyone doesn't like that, please write your feelings down and throw them in a trash can. Fyrehart, you are very skilled.

Thanks for continuing the story you writ very well.

Hope to see her properly turned out. If she's ever rescued it should be as a pregnant mother of three (sold) babes five or six years hence.

I don't mind waiting haha great story so far. Good things take time and writing isn't always easy. Looking forward to the next chapter.

We are waiting for your next chapter please do it quickly

Stop asking for speed. You saying "go faster" is not magically going to produce a new chapter. Wait patiently, thankfully and silently.

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Fantasy is not reality. Maybe you shouldn't be reading erotic fiction if you can't tell the difference.

just found this story and I am so turned on by it! If Lexi was real I would stand in line to pay for her pussy

This is a very good story! Keep up the good job! Thanks

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I'm sure it will be amazing as always. Thank you for your dedication. The vast majority of readers appreciate it.

I loved the story. To make Lexi's breasts grow faster and bigger, why not have Susan force Lexi to take a lactation-inducing hormone (namely prolactin). Many of whore house's customers would pay extra getting a shot of fresh human milk directly from the tap.

Continue and maybe more on Alexa being raped by nieghbor more .

Maybe given to job....broken to where maybe nieghbor decides to buy her and keep her in basement.

He builds sound proof room to keep her in.

Or if he doesn't buy her what she is used for and her film career.

The who storyline if Sammi and hoe she got there.

Maybe other teens taken from Church groups