All Comments on 'Forest Magic'

second part. please

I started to read this but then it really became too much. You need to break up paragraphs, what's here is quite difficult to read and just hurts the eyes and boggles the mind. I'm sure you have a great story here but I simply can't handle a massive wall like this.

A very complicated scene. Will there be more? Thanks.

I would like to read a second chapter. This is interesting tho confusing in places.

Your characters names are fascinating.