All Comments on 'Forever'
by Moondancer925
- 18 Comments
Anonymousover 5 years agoWhy do women have such an affiliation with black cocks! There are white cooks that bigger! Look at John Holmes.
Anonymousover 7 years agoCool story but one thing bothered me. He's from Haiti so he has an Haitian accent, not French. French spoken in France is much different from French spoken in Haiti.
estragonabout 13 years agoExquisitely written, intensely painful, beautiful. More more more!
JennyBearover 13 years agoQuite a story, you brought tears to my eyes. TY for writing.
Anonymousover 13 years agoYou write an interesting tale of what our western world deems problematic kind of love. It seems only the young and the beautiful are entitled to this prized condition. Your story explores the possibilities in a wonderful context - BRAVO & Take a bow.
Peace
Gil
whatzhisfaceover 13 years agoAs someone else said on these comments: You have a great talent, please write more like this. More, more, more!
Anonymousover 13 years agoThe story is beautiful an real. The set pieces and descriptions of Naples and its beach right on. Nice work.
demantoidover 13 years agoBeautifully written and plotted...a terrific love story!
Carcamover 13 years agoThis is a warm, beautiful, heartfelt and happy story! I said "Happy" because love makes living and dieing do-able! This is one of the few very good stories on this site - keep up the good work, I can hardly wait to read more of your stories!
CCH
Anonymousover 13 years agoShould we be reading between the lines?? Are you or someone you know suffering?? It seems very close to the heart.
BigJohn601over 13 years agoThanks for a thoughtful story of the necessity of love in all stages of life especially the dying.
Anonymousover 13 years agoWow!! This story has to be one of the best ones on this entire site. It was full of emotion and sensuality. It made me cry!!!
You have a great talent, please write more like this.
FrankjrBauerover 13 years agoI'm a widower 61 year old and I cried my eyes out.
Thanks for sharing
owengreybeardover 13 years agoThank you so much for that jewel. Now I have to explain why a grown man in a coffee shop on a lovely day is sniffling and dabbing his eyes like a little girl. It's all your fault, but I happily forgive you.
