All Comments on 'Forever Yours Ch. 01'

This is a great start and I love it so much. looking forward to the upcoming chapters

Cock tease. Too long to have to wait for a second chapter for cock sucking and ass-fucking. I was half-hard, waiting, and playing with my cock, getting ready for the fuck scene. Meh.

Quick word of advice. You've made one of your central characters lack any redeeming values. Marcos being a spoiled, rich, rapist leaves the audience with no reason to want to see him change. There's gonna have to be an extreme amount of groveling by Marcos to right this wrong. Even then, how do you realistically apologize for attempted rape?

Just cant wait for next one... wow wht a writing.... c

I cannot wait for the rest of this story. This is awesome. So the rich playboy don't know how to take no for an answer. He is so use to everyone falling all over him he cannot understand how a common boy can refuse him. He needs to stand back and realize that some people have dignity and do not sell themselves short for money. Mr. Martinez need a rude awakening and I think Ramon is the one to wake him up so to speak. I wish I could give you a ten.