All Comments on 'Forever Yours Ch. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
twist

Unexpected plot twist. Such a great read.

Really want the ramon/marcos love to triumph .

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Interesting

Though interesting twist it's all becoming a bit much and your sentence and grammar syntax needs assistance.

RichBauerRichBaueralmost 7 years ago
great strory

cannot wait for next chapter terriffic story

o2byoungo2byoungalmost 7 years ago
As I said

Ramon, watch out - I think Marcos mother has something to do with this!

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