All Comments on 'Forever Yours Ch. 10'

I literally can't stop reading this story. I have become obsessed and I need more please!!!!

Can you improve on perfection ??? You just did! This is amazing, I love this story and agree, please as Oliver once said ... "I want more!"

Could hardly contain myself why reading ....... continue plz

OMG the sex scene was rough and hot loved it. This story has me waiting Impatiently for the next chapter...CAN'T WAIT

I can't seem to let go...i want to read this story forever...please don't let me wait for ch1...This story is like a sickness a drug i can't resist...

Still not sure what to make of this. It's an enjoyable and addictive read. But no one with whom one can really identify. Dan is in love but can't stop behaving like a twit. I'd originally hoped he would fall in love with Mark and find fulfilment in his arms and then the four could become really good friends. Instead you have made him into a petulant child. I hope you can help him find genuine happiness because somehow he seems to be too good for the way you are portraying him. Olivia and Maddison are beyond redemption and nothing will be too bad for them. Just hope that James isn't destroyed by way of collateral damage.

And the two main characters. Ramon seems detached from the world and his once love for Marcos seems to be sublimated to his need for revenge. And Marcos is weak, unable to stand up to his mother and admit his love for Ramon.

So I look forward to reading your resolution. I guess that is the mark of a good writer, one who leaves you always wanting more. And I want more of this

QUOTE - "Dan is in love but can't stop behaving like a twit. I'd originally hoped he would fall in love with Mark and find fulfilment in his arms and then the four could become really good friends. Instead you have made him into a petulant child ..."

Are we forgetting that it was Dan that got the thugs to RAPE Ramon once they have made the video??? It was him that got them to hurt the boy ... Why does he deserve a happy ending?

This is sooooo awesome. Thank you for such an addictive read. Want to see justice for Ramon, but at some point the old sweet boy needs to return. Yes, Olivia and her minions need their just desserts, Marcos needs to know the entire truth. Keep it coming! Can't wait!

dam so like you giving us a chapter each day you make me rush to see if you have posted each morning. Just cant wait to see how Marcos mom and Dan get caught in their lie. Thanks again for the story John

plz in the next chapter make the romance btn ramon and marcos,let them feel each other

let marcos kneel before ramon as u did to henry and goerge in''destined lovers"

make marcos cry for ramon,,atleast let marcos steal akiss from ramon and ramon slap him plzz after that bring back our sweet ramon plz let them succeed together

make olivia and that whore dan regret plz....All in all

your the best at this site plz promise to write other stories with new technics as u did in "destined lovers" and"forever yours[actually its lyk am ramon and thomas is marcos]" love ur work vanalas

oh make things hot btn ramon and marcos

make olivia regret..Bring back our sweet ramon and damn that dan

make grip bedsheets as makes gives it all

make them succeed together

all in all your the best please more stories gay stories thank u

I love this story, it gets better and better. I can't stop reading every time a new chapter comes and I like your long chapters. I like the details and descriptions of the characters, the environments, and the thoughts of each person. Besides the mix up in names and the sometimes strange use of the English language I think it's well written and I love reading every word. Keep up the good work and thank you for sharing this with us. Can't wait for the next chapter.

please more and more of this story and make things hot between ramon and marcos

let them succeed together and let olivia and her company get what they deserve,hurt them

bring back our sweet ramon,,,

bestwriter at this site please more stories

Oh boy..! Ramon is surely playing with fire. He will end up getting hurt. But can't wait to get those 3 idiots to be taken down. Maybe make them confess while husband and son are witnessing it without being noticed.

A really wicked story in all senses

Many congrats. I love the twists and turns. I hope there is a moment between Ramon and Olivia to turn the tables p. Marcos needs a good smacking from Ramon

Great story, mate

Love from Spain!

ramon deserves marcos and i think he will make it

Every day looking for the next chapter. The story is very compelling. Romantic and you always hope for justification followed by a happy ending.

Please don't let Ramon get hurt badly. I'm looking forward to this series everyday. He needs to let Marcos know what Olivia and Dan did to him. Please let him expose them so that Marcos and him can be together please please please...... Love these stories to the moon and back.

Better than a great mystery novel - Just when I think it can't get much better, the next chapter gets better. Seem you're getting better at proofreading, only a couple mistakes screamed in this chapter, and I have read from Ch 4 or 5 through 10 today. (of course I got NOTHING else done today!)

My ass is sore from the hours I've been sitting, entranced by this story. Another 5*.

Go Ramon!!! Nailed them! Fight! Fight! Fight!👏👏👏

Wow I cant explain how much i love this series 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏