All Comments on 'Forgetting the Past Ch. 02'

Heehee, I liked this so much better than chapter one. It's got hints of fable (Snow White and Rose Red) and I like the way you tied the start to the end with Tyler's remark. But you took your time with the love scene and that made it really sweet. The observations like the one where Ares is playing dot to dot with Ty's freckles made me smile (wonder what picture he comes up with?) Waiting eagerly for Chapter 3. :P

Also liked this chapter better than the first. The only thing that bugs me is that Azrael is such a cartoonish character.

Great story, Im looking forward to more :)

More, please, mooooooooore

God, you have a way with the hot scenes. Bloody hell! Really, really hot without being crude, which makes it even hotter! It's a fine line to walk and wow! You do it so well :)

Brilliant! One of the best writers here!