All Comments on 'Forgive Me...But You're Mine Ch. 04'

Loving this story.

So happy that you continued to write! Waiting for the next chapter!

Absolutely love these characters and your writing. Thanks.

Loved the new chapter, but he's obviously thinking with his little head now. Threaten rape (which it would be at this point) when trying to calm a woman out of a panic attack!?! Could this possibly be the worst blind date ever? Having family fix you up often turns into a cluster f*ck. :D:D:D

This would be a great cliffhanger if the length of time between each time you post a chapter weren't so long. The chapter is too short and given that this is an erotic fiction website, it's time that some erotic scenes start to materialize in this story. To leave off this chapter with such a cliffhanger is disappointing, knowing that it'll be awhile before the next chapter is submitted. It's more likely you'll turn away your readers rather than keep them hanging on.

Your writing is really good but your chapters are too short, given the length of time between each chapter. Extending this chapter and having the two main characters finally connect physically would've been the better way to go.

Just my 2 cents. Thanks as always for sharing your story.

First of all - glad to see this fine story moving along :-)

I must admit though that the last sentence in this chapter to me seemed a bit out of character - even for Jared.

You get a four from me ;-)

why haven't you continued this story?

Are you planning on updating this story? I hope you do! :-)

Could you please continue this story. It has been too long now

I just want to explain why this story is taking so long to write. I am actually writing my dissertation atm and so I barely have any time to continue writing this story but I try to as often as I can. I will continue writing this story because I love the characters and cant wait to write what happens next. I hope you don't mind waiting and can hold on for the next chapter :) x

Enjoying the character development and can't wait to see where this goes. Goodluck with the dissertation xx

I'm so glad you want to continue this story it is one of my favourites.

This story has so much potential! I can't wait for more!!!

please.. continue this story... we need you!

This story is incredibly hot! I'm dying to read the next chapter! ^_^

Publish another chapter. Great story. Please write more of it. Thanks.

Please.. continue this story!

Great story and mostly well written. But, this is the 4th story in a row I have begun reading on this site that the author has evidently abandoned -- read eight months of leaving readers hanging -- and am now thinking some do it intentionally. In fairness to readers is it too much to ask authors to label the last part of a story as the conclusion to keep us from being victimized by such as this one.

I want to know more

I firstly want to apologise for not having added to this story in a while. I have been super busy writing tons of erotica stories online. I have been checking back on this story from time to time and I've been meaning to finish it but I have ended up completing 27 erotica stories about other romantic but dark couples before finally gaining the energy to start this story back up again. If you want to see all the other stories I've wrote during this time check me out on all the major ebook publishing sites. My names Lily Anderson. I promise I have been busy ;) but for now without further delay my goal is to get back together with these two love birds and find out where this story takes them! I'm back on it.

Please do. Think of it like this: no-one telling you what's appropriate to write here and it's the dark corner of the bookshelf, almost. You can have a brain-party and while readers can complain about the noise, that's just the deciding-factor for you to turn the volume up.

Really appreciating your story!

Evebroughtanaxthistime

Please please please finish this story

Please finish this story. I really like these two, and want to know what happens.

Why abandon a story that has the potential such as this one to become one of the best on the site? Possibly we readers are being just played? Would not like to think that of such a talented author, but......

Get that little hottie naked and keep her that way and bang her senseless every hour of the day.

I loved the story so far. I really hope you finish it.

ARE YOU THE SAME LILY ANDERSON WHO WROTE THE VAMPIRE'S SEX SLAVE ON THIS WEBSITE?? MAYBE YOU HAVE MORE THAN ONE ACCOUNT??? IF SO, THAT STORY NEEDS TO BE FINISHED TOO!!!!!!!

Great story! I do hope you continue and finish it. I really want to know what happens.

Wonderful!

I can’t wait to read more of this story. Right now, I’m kind of hoping that Nicki and Jared wind up together.

Please continue!

Another make fuck up woman has to fix lame and old.

It's good. Would have loved an ending to that story.

I absolutely hate unfinished stories on this site. Particularly because unlike other platforms, you have no way of knowing it's incomplete until you've actually invested time... like an unknowing fool.