by NickyFaulkes
But do look up the difference between discrete and discreet (which you meant).
And "Don't peak." ===> "Don't peek."
this was actually really well written. I have really gotten to the point where firm breast,hips and thighs do nothing but annoy me, but your writing makes it a moot point. I wasn't so much seeing the typical bottle blonde bimbo, rather I was seeing a woman that could've have been myself, even though I am not athletically "firm" nor am I blonde. I loved the way you wrote out Marly and Charly as the, forgive me, "fake" girls while the focus remains on the woman in the habit. Truly it gave a flash back to the red headed nun in the Sister Act movies.
Well done. I think you have found your niche.