All Comments on 'Formula B'

I laughed, yes it is a variation on an old joke but I didn't see it coming so kudo's to you!

Thanks for sharing

Ahaz

and a great story! This is 5* all the way!

The ending was great.

5*

I WANT SOME FORMULA B MYSELF!!! (she'll never see it coming...)

Thank you, I needed that!

I loved it, what a fun little story and the ending really cracked me up. Have 5 stars!

Great buildup. Lots of naughty suggestions, considering the LW category. Still smiling. Thanks.

So funny!!!!!

A hilarious loving wives tale. Just we all need right now. Excellent!

Five Stars

Nice way to start my day. Good little story.

A variation on an old joke, but very well told. I enjoyed it. Thanks

Fun story

And, as others have said, well-told.

Lue

This one actually made me laugh, thank you for a great start to the day.

5/5

A good twist in the end and a good laugh...And any story that make us have a sane laugh, deserves to be read...4*

Thank you # 5

thanks for the info, I was at a loss as to what stoney`s was or is. that info

makes the tale. lol nice flash tale

Expected her to cheat with the doctor, or take the formula herself and end up sleeping with half the city. Loved it.

but still a little chaffed that you didnt finish your first story. A little lecture, you write well, very good at introducing and amping up tension in a story, but you have to learn to finish them. It is the most difficult part of writing. In this story, finish is fine, but that first story, readers desire to learn what happened to the parties and it was just left hanging.

Even though I'd heard that joke before, and I knew what was coming, I still enjoyed the story.

Great spin on a very old joke, didn't see it coming. Keep up the good work!

Fantastic and only husband and wife involved. 24 carat

JustWritingANov will be here all week. Try the veal. Don't forget to tip your waitress.

Humor is damn hard, but this got a real laugh out of me. Well done!

Very fun!

Thanks for this very satisfying short!

I've got a smile on my face and a tingle in my shorts!

Well done!

good one

Priceless .....................

To bad I've heard that joke before.

Sorry about the delay on Part 3 of Warmth In The Snow. Just have been crushed by deadlines lately. In truth, this little story took 30 minutes to bang out so why not?

Could have banged this story out in 5 minutes. I heard this joke

about 20 years ago. Don't steal other material - be original!!!

1 star...

I don't care if it is an old joke, it was not expected here and i laughed my ass off. Five stars for brightening my day.

....like vaudeville week on LW.

Really, it could be a blast.

In any case, thank you. Old joke or no, it was a fun little piece...."that's what HE said!"

The joke was never that funny. Worth a three.

Well done! I laughed out loud.

Thanks!

Very well written with a great punchline.

Great embellishment on an old gag. Best one pager in a while.

5Stars

JimC

I wasn't sure where this was going, but that ending made me laugh out loud.

Very well retold! 5*

..still funny.

Thanks,

MGM

Made me laugh! Nice job.

Very good and funny!

Thank you for sharing and please keep writing!!

This was funny. DO another one. I wish this happened to me.

Good one! Should be humor.

Boyd Percy

Love to recycle old jokes. There's always a new audience. Loved the lead in!

Well done!

The biggest smile I had today!

Like an old joke 'guy and his wife enter a bar......' kind of thing.

Excellent story. Both fun and entertaining to read. Keep it up, this was great!

had a real shitty day and this made me truly LOL.

Thank you

although I'm wondering if being band from shoney's is good or bad, but that's beside the point.

Sometimes the old jokes, set up well, are the best.

I don't know why I'm laughing, I've been telling variations of this story for years, I wish I'd thought to post it here, I'm going through my mind now trying to come up with something, when I do you'll be the first to read it. Well done. 4*

Oldie but a goodie. made me smile again

Great end of the work day story. I loved it. I needed a laugh. Thank you so much!

I've heard that joke several times before but I still didn't see it coming. Excellent retelling- well done. Brought a smile to my face.

PaulFelly

HA, HA, HA, Ha, Ha, Ha, ha, ha, ha......... ............ ..........ROTFLMAO❗

That was just an awesome surprise.

Thank you JustWritingANov. I always enjoy a good laugh.

I am, after all

AMerryman

Nice one!

I haven't had such a laugh in a very long time! Hmm - just what the Doctor ordered!

Great Story! 5*****.

Hot and funny. Kudos!

Damn, now I have to find a Shoney's.

That was good. I needed a good laugh. Thanks

About time someone took it to another level! Fucking A, Dude.

Thanks for the laugh.

Just one small issue with this story, unless the reader is a USA traveler you might not know what a "Shoney's" is - think Denny's or IHOP.

amusingly revisited...Thanks.

at that punch line.

Thanks!

EXCELLENT! My wife wondered why I was laughing so damn loud, she came in the computer room. Demanded to know what was going on - I showed her the story and you can guess what that lead to (after she told me I was a pervert).

A very fun story, reminds me of the when I came home from work with a very upset stomach, my wife she gave me some milk of magnesia in water what was my usual solution but she misread the instructions and gave me a tablespoon instead of a teaspoon, I spent most the night on the loo.

Miss read tsp for tbsp.

Cutie but dose should have on the bottle.

I can just picture Shoney's patrons watching this middle-aged couple in a monkey bang fest in the middle of the restaurant!

5 for the chance to read it again.

that's hysterical nice work!😆😆😆😆👍👏

😂😂😂

This kind of reminds me of the time I was in the doctors waiting room nervous to learn the results of my annual physical. The nurse called me and I sat beside the doctor who was viewing my readout. Looking up he said rather sternly, Mr. Anderson you're going to have to stop masturbating. Why doctor is it bad for my health I asked? No, the doctor replied but it's scaring my patients!

That was fun.

Now that's funny !!

I don't care who you are , that was funny! Where the hell did they find a Shoneys? They all closed around.here.

I very seldom award a story 5 stars. This is one of those times.

Very well done. I loved it. 5*s.

That was an elegant and very funny retelling of an old joke. Well done, sir!

A truly enjoyable joke. Thank you for that,

Give yo a five Spliffs fo ya story, mon ( but do not smoke them‘a t once, mon)

Thumbs‘ar up

Hahahahaha. That was fantastic. bravissimo

and chuckled each time. It would be terrible to be banned from Shoneys hot fudge cake and coffee but their half hour of primal rutting with too many orgasms to count sounds well worth the sacrifice.

Thanks for a great story.

A literal laugh out loud - good thing I'm alone.

That was a cute story ..

That was a cute story...

So funny! 5********

Good take on the old Startbucks joke !

5* for making me laugh

Meh

I've noticed a few stories here that are expanded versions of old jokes.

Would've been more fun if I hadn't read the original to begin with, but it's still better than a lot of the 'formulaic' entries around here.

Thanks for the laugh.

3 stars - sort of funny - the woman is too ditsy.

Haha, funny! Thanks

5⭐ just for the last line alone. The rest of the story was pretty good as well.

Loved it.

Ed

Wow!!! Nice build up, to those couple of sentences at th end. Which caused coffee to be expelled out of my nose. 5 stars. S. F.

Fantastic.

Spectacular ending! I had half an alcoholic drink come outta my nose. 😅 thanks for it, too. S. F.

Ha, you got me! I didn’t see that coming. Nice to get a smile at the end of a story. 5*