All Comments on 'Fortieth Birthday Surprise'

Absolutely incredible. WHat a great birthday surprise...

I can only imagine what hte next birthday celebration will be like.

I am confident that this does happen in real life. WOW

bchiker2004

Just the right twist!

Its a great story. I noticed something though, you said the chick had big tits for her small body...then said she wore a 40d. I assume shes short too but unless shes 6foot tall or more then to wear a 40 anything shed be over 200 lbs. I dont even wear that large of a band size at 5'10 and 190 wearing a d or dd. Just letting ya know for the future. ;)

Men are idiots and led around by their little heads. Women have known that forever.

I hate stories where the authors make their characters dumber than rocks. Did this guy have an IQ of 10? You write him as someone in love with his wife. NO WAY does he touch Karen with a 10 foot pole. It's simply against everything we know about his character. Lame ass story.

And that was being generous.