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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Enjoyable even without setup

I think this was well-written and enjoyable to read. It would be perfect if there were a setup to build up tension in the beginning and it could have used more description of the bodies in my opinion. Believable and arousing nonetheless. Thanks!

- R

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