All Comments on 'Four Plus One 05: Nice-rough'

by ReefBeach

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Anonymousalmost 9 years ago

Enjoyable continuation, as always - with one request

Can you please bring back Danny's "voice"? I enjoyed how you incorporated that into the first story - made it more than an enjoyable sex romp - added some depth to the story by making Danny more than a stud muffin. By now, I thought he would have had a theological discussion with Andrea - not saying we necessarily need one, but their personalities add "spice" to the story. Well done!

ReefBeach almost 9 years agoAuthor

You're right

I have been a bit slack with the interior voices. I like the theology idea, too: I'll take that! Thanks for the feedback.

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I want to write and read interesting, believable stories, although a touch of humour or the bizarre will usually help! Most importantly, I want to respect my characters. I see too much disrespect in the sex we see around, especially for women.

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