All Comments on 'Four Plus One 06: Two into One'

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Anonymousover 6 years ago

Spelling, mostly

This is a great story, well written and intelligent. I'm really enjoying it, But please learn the difference between "discreet" and "discrete", and the apostrophe - e.g in "you're" (meaning "you are" ) and (no apostrophe) "your" - the possessive of "you" - e.g "your tits are wonderful". And - although you haven't used the expression) "Chaise longue"., NOT Chaise "lounge". ("Chaise longue" is French, originally meaning a long chair; Lounge sounds like the posh room in a down-market boozer.

ReefBeach over 6 years agoAuthor

thanks for the feedback

I know spelling gets to some people, so I try to be careful... not sure if your comments relate to this actual story, though.

Love the idea of a shabby boozer with a room called the Chaise Lounge. I'm using that!

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I want to write and read interesting, believable stories, although a touch of humour or the bizarre will usually help! Most importantly, I want to respect my characters. I see too much disrespect in the sex we see around, especially for women.

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