All Comments on 'Foursome with Molly and Our Mothers'

It may just be me but the interaction between the charactors is to mechanical and a bit of dialog between them would really spice it up, at least in my eyes.

Good strong lesbian love, with total freedom to share and enjoy. Looking forward to the next chapter as thay date and grow into one family.

I hope you will write more about these four ladies please brilliant story need more thank you lesbian luvr. xxxx

Try adding some dialog. all the story is at this point is a string of actions such as molly moves head to here licks anus and mom moves head kisses back you should spend time describing the positions they are in how they are feeling at that moment.