All Comments on 'Fourteen Days'

I was a clueless as Kristy about who the mysterious admirer might be. Kristy suffered enough with Damien--now it's time for her to spread her wings and fly free.

Interesting story, and good luck in the Valentine's Day contest.

Cute, but way too long. Well written. I can understand the lack of eroticism until the end. Extensive "fact checking" as to the history of Valentine's day rituals

I really liked your story. I did find it to be a bit long at times, but still a enjoyable premise. I do hope that you continue this through another few chapters...this is too good a story to stop here...=)

5 Stars

I gave up on page 2. 1*

Though I did guess it was Damien after she mentioned feeling stalked I liked this story. Continue writing and good luck.

5 stars.

The stalking was well executed. It is shame, that, the guy was not of the same quality.

Kept me trying to guess who it was, never dreaming that it would be the ex!

I think the same as the previous comment. I spent almost the whole story trying to imagine who was the one who sent her Valentine's gifts to her. I thought it was Darren until he said it was not, I also thought about Daniel, but I did not imagine it was Damien.

A great story, I really like your Romances!

5 * for you.

I apologize for my English (yet and forever), isn't my native language.

As soon as her ex's name was mentioned. Good think Jump had Kanga's back. Really cute story and lots if interesting info.

Besides a good story, you really know how to describe lovemaking (and not just fucking). 3rd story in a row that I read from you, and they all have wonderful sex scenes.

Good story but AWFUL END

Wow big thank you I read this story couple years ago couldn’t remember what it was called or who wrote it so I’ve had to go through a lot of stories to find it again

Yes being careful and awareness will save you from terrible decisions …. She may should have asked about this “charity” and getting some knowledge, to spare her this horrific experience ….. BUT those sick dumb idiots like ex whatever, this counts for women and men ex partners, are just around like the fly on a brown something …. A restraining order is definitely needed , bastard …… ok back to the happy ending, perfect ….. so yeah 10 hearts for this 💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨☘️