All Comments on 'Fox Hunt Ch. 01'

The story hews to the standard comic conventions of the "ambushed hero(ine)" with an erotic twist. The last bit with Butterscotch's sister being held is also pretty standard and of course makes me hope for a bonecrunching finale for Dr. Payne. Hopefully not before we have a decent story. My only concern thus far is, besides Siver Fox being touch enough to withstand an incredible amount of damage, the Foxes seem relatively incompetent.

I liked it. The villians were written well. The heros were fun.

Well written heroines and villainesses.

I'm looking forward to the next few (I hope there's going to be more than one!) chapters.

Very nice beginning . Hope you write more