All Comments on 'Frank Devaroux, P.I. Case File 01'

It should have been two lower, one off for every page after page one--Unfortunately I could not do that

Nicely done. Well thought out steps. More of a detective story then anything erotic. More time spent on describing the sex more completely would have been nice. But overall a nice read.

From your writing style, the story itself, the characters... you should have sold this!<br><br>

I'm glad you placed it here though as I completely enjoyed it. Yeah more sex would have been nice, but no one reads a story this long if they're just looking for stroke material!!<br><br>

I hope you'll be writing more!!

I have to agree...you should have sold it. Absolutely stellar writing, character and plot development, and just enough sex to keep it interesting. And being from Denver the local color was perfect as well.

What a great yarn. Enjoyed it immensely. Mr Devaroux could be the basis for a lot of stories with the friends he's got.

Thanks again

This would make a delicious film. The main character was complicated, fascinating and well developed and the entire story was incredibly well written.

I loved your style and character development. If this were a book, I would have trouble putting it down.

Should have sold the story to one of the detective TV shows. A little more descriptive erotic content would have helped but no complaints. I enjoyed it thoroughly.

Really up my alley. A lot more substance than most storys on here. Really interesting and engaging. This is the first I have read of yours but will certainly be looking for more. Thanks D

I liked the previous comment about it playing 'like a movie'. I immediately saw Humphrey Bogart playing the PI and Bacall playing the female cop/detective.

Good in a very noir way.