by MyRy
Why did you stop??????????Please continue the story
Please, please continue this story, it is so full of warmth and love in the face off big odds. Thank yo
Take your time. I know how life gets in the way. Just please don't forget Dante and Aria. I want to know their story.
Not trying to be nasty. Just honest. The basic story is good, but you're butchering it with bad spelling & incorrect grammar. I gave it two stars because of that. If not for those very real impediments to my reading, I would have given it four stars. Clean it up, & keep it going!
I REALLY enjoyed this. It's a great story. I hope you continue.
Thanks very much!
This person is writing three stories at once. That means waiting months between chapter,s there,s better stories out there. And how the fuck is someone who,s six foot four supposed to fit in a fiat 500.
Dear Author, Another nice character study. Maybe elaborate on Dante's background, to fill out the character study. Enjoyable! Please write more. Many thanks, jntiques