All Comments on 'Frankenstein & Beast Ch. 01'

by MyRy

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Why did you stop??????????Please continue the story

Why did you stop??????????Please continue the story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Please, please continue

Please, please continue this story, it is so full of warmth and love in the face off big odds. Thank yo

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Love it!

Take your time. I know how life gets in the way. Just please don't forget Dante and Aria. I want to know their story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Story's good. Your writing needs a lot of work

Not trying to be nasty. Just honest. The basic story is good, but you're butchering it with bad spelling & incorrect grammar. I gave it two stars because of that. If not for those very real impediments to my reading, I would have given it four stars. Clean it up, & keep it going!

BH54BH54almost 8 years ago
Keep going

I REALLY enjoyed this. It's a great story. I hope you continue.

Thanks very much!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

I can't wait for you to continue, I love it so far !

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
don,t bother

This person is writing three stories at once. That means waiting months between chapter,s there,s better stories out there. And how the fuck is someone who,s six foot four supposed to fit in a fiat 500.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Dear Author, Another nice character study. Maybe elaborate on Dante's background, to fill out the character study. Enjoyable! Please write more. Many thanks, jntiques

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Hey, At this point I usually introduce myself with my real name, but this is was we love about lit, anonymity. I'm a passionate writer who loves to explore the depths of stories and twists they come with. I have to admit that I am still developing as a writer, which can be s...