All Comments on 'Frankfurt Ch. 01'

Off to an nice start, but not a fan of stories that end before any real flavor is added.

Thank you, and I understand about the last part of your comment, however Jack is still in the dark at this point. It takes him a little while to see the light. But the dawning is coming.

enjoyed the story

I've heard of the 6916 and the 17th and the 20th and a few others... looks like he could be headed for a rough row to hoe... better keep his head straight!

Thanks. Ch. 02 has been submitted.