All Comments on 'Frank's Angels Fantasy #002'

YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW HOW TO SPELL. IN THE TITLE LINE IT's wear not were...dumb stupid cunt. all you know how to be is cowardly to a little punk self styled ( CALL ME master...WITH LIMP WRIST AND THE WHOLE WORKS) bullshit punk and whore diease ridden skank

I found it a little harder to connect to the character than in your first story - it seemed a little stilted by comparison, but overall I enjoyed it.

.. for a great story - reminds me of dining out with my late Master and some of the fun W/we had.

As for the idiot Anon poster who critisized your spelling and sexuality - might I suggest the pseudo 'master' (sic) checks his/her own grammar prior to posting critique of authors.

Keep up the good work Franks_Angel.

dd x

Excellent story!

Frank Albergo

I really enjoyed the sense of intimacy that you are able to express with your work. The small, intimate and very real settings help establish the sense that you are witnessing as the reader something very discreet and erotic. Once again, thank you for posting this. Please pass on my regards to your Master.

Like many of the stories that I have read on Literotica, this one was truly excellent. It contained an interesting plot and vivid descriptions. The one distracting part about it was the spelling and gramatical errors that the spell-check obviously missed. It only takes a few minutes to review your work and shows that you are indeed serious about your writing. Spell-check is wonderful but it can only catch just so much. It is up to the writer to catch the rest to show a truly professional work.

so fucked up

incredibly hot, and loving also. i'd love to be in your mind haha