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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Mindfucker Blues

I enjoy your incest stories a lot. In this story, we get an aberrant tale of mind control and calculated hate, a Jew fucking over the Aryan race one bimbo at a time.

The historical amnesia of the Germans, Japanese, the Russians, and a variety of others about WW II atrocities is dismaying, not shocking.

The people that lived through them want to forget them. Their descendants are kept in the dark so not to reject their elders as weak, horrible, whatever.

As George Santayana once put it, those that forget the past are doomed to repeat it.

We're knee-deep in the next version of Nixon-era Vietnam, where no principle is sacred, only not looking like losers as we blunder, stumble, and desecrate everything we hold dear flailing in the sand instead of jungle muck.

I look at our flag and feel shame and horror at what my country has become.

To every know-nothing bonehead that accuses me of being unpatriotic, I quote Tom Paine, "Eternal vigilance is the price of liberty" (we've clearly let ourselves fall asleep)and Benjamin Frankiln's quote everyone's used,"Those that desire security at the price of freedom deserve neither freedom nor security"

I want America to be something I can feel pride of pointing the way toward a better future for humanity, not a bloated, tyrannical, spooked elephant trampling everything in its path, sublimely indifferent to the consequences.

To my fellow Americans, I know we can do better for ourselves and the world at large by considering ourselves part of a world, not just of our country.

To the other 6.2 billion people out there, I know you're not worried about Iran or North Korea having a few nukes.

The Iranians and North Koreans know they'd be committing national suicide if they ever used them, so their rhetoric is a lot of hot air by mullahs and tyrants trying to seem relevant to themselves.

You're probably a lot more worried about America's 12,500 nukes and Cowboy George's empty 10-gallon hat and an itchy trigger finger against easy targets, like Iraq.

I wish y'all were wrong in that assessment. However, we

must deal with the truth here. Atrocities occur when we cannot abide the truth about ourselves and feel justified

whatever we do to our supposedly subhuman, immoral, wicked enemies.

Many of you consider us Americans to be wicked, lazy buffoons or worse. We probably are.

9/11 happened because some jihadis wanted to make America aware it wasn't alone or invulnerable. As to bringing us to our political/economic/military knees, it was a spectacular failure.

It pissed us off and considered all Muslims, Arabs or otherwise as convenient targets. Our collective apathy about various Middle Eastern issues became toxic contempt. The abuses at Abu Ghraib occur in that atmosphere of contempt.

In your story, you equate German insularity with the causes of two world wars and numerous atrocities.

As a casual student of history, I agree the Germans have been their own worst enemies from 1900-1945 by simply believing that every german soldier was worth ten of their opponents and what looked logistically hopeless would be borne out by their superior performance.

Enter Hitler, the one shouting loudest in a political vacuum of discredited, squabbling incompetents. He equated the Jews with the Bolshevists whose strikes and mutinies brought Germanty to its knees to sue for peace in WWI.

Hitler, Goebbels, &Co. played on real and imagined grievances to bring out the worst in German society during a time of turmoil and want.

A lot of Germans just went along. Some didn't, but Hitler didn't allow room for dissent.

They got shot, or worked to death in the camps, betrayed by their own neighbors, families, and friends.

They were bombarded with endless jingoistic propoganda that made dissent Anti-German so even if they had grave moral misgivings, they felt emasculated and impotent.

In that atmosphere, atrocities were inevitable.Still, many chose to do what they could to ameliorate those outrages at the cost of their lives and their souls.

I don't feel the Germans were unique. They got pushed and pulled by lunatics running the asylum.It happened before and will happen again if we let it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
awesome tail

i love your story. i am a halfblack half italian man. i look italian but i grew up in a black family. i love fucking racist bitches even more so when i was down south in the army.

don87654don87654over 17 years ago
Good reading!

It is too bad that you did not bring those two frauleins with your babies growing in their bellies, home with you to share your home and wife and children with you in a type of shack job marriage/partnership. On that you could have written several more chapters as you made siblings and half-siblings with the three women as well as began fucking your daughters as they reached puberty to produce more babies.

don87654don87654over 17 years ago
Good reading!

It is too bad that you did not bring those two frauleins with your babies growing in their bellies, home with you to share your home and wife and children with you in a type of shack job marriage/partnership. On that you could have written several more chapters as you made siblings and half-siblings with the three women as well as began fucking your daughters as they reached puberty to produce more babies.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Another peice of trash

hiding under the racist anti-semitic cover. Not enought for sex it has to be jews and germans. I am waiting for your next story of an arab and jewish girls , or terrorists and rape of Amerian servicewomen or on and on and on. Absolutely no difference in the big cock nigger adnthe white southern girls, just change 60 words and resubmit for another 5 stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
disturbing

Yuck! The protagonist's attitude here is just plain disturbing, too disturbing to make this an enjoyable read. And I say this as a Jew and a grandchild of Holocaust survivors.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
What a let down

I usually love your work, but this was a piece of crap from start to finish.Racism is not sexxxy no matter which race is the butt of it. Iam always amazed at how many Jews will not buy any German products because of the war, but are first in line to buy anything Japanese. Japan was just as evil and brutal as Germany. Ask anyone of the few that survived the Rape of Nanking.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Grea Story

If you are a Jew, I hope you are doing the damn neo nazi's. And scratch more german made cars too. Let's fuck some muslim's too.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Where's the revenge?

The same racial hatred of Jews extends back 2,000 years using the same reasoning your character uses in his hatred of Germans for something a little over 60 years ago. Must the children always pay for the sins of the parents? Having said that, I believe the victims must have the knowledge that they are carrying Jewish seeds within their bellies and why? Otherwise what's the point? The mc should be about not being able to terminate the pregnancy and being good mothers even though they know the father is a hated Jew. Btw, nudists are 'naturists', not naturalists.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
another one who hasn't learned from history

wow. amazing how wonderfully the abuses of WWII are remembered, yet without any real sense of history behind it. Another mindless tale of "my people were oppressed long before I was born, so I'm going to exact revenge personally" This same excuse has been used for countless wars. In fact, if you look at biblical history, the Hebrews committed worse atrocities when entering the "promised land" after leaving Egypt than the Nazis did. They both committed genocide. Grow up. learn from the past instead of holding grudges. maybe then the situation in this world will get better.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Best. Story. Ever.

nuff said.

this shit deserves a sequel.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Yet Another Hate-Filled jew....

....who lusts for revenge on his betters through defiling their "golden shiksas" ('shiksa' is jew-speak for 'non-jewish whore'). Where do jews get this murderous hatred? Is it due to their endlessly harped-upon travails in the so-called Holocaust? Hardly. It's literally thousands of years old; they get it from their "holy" book, the Talmud. Here's a few actual quotes from it:

"Jehovah created the non-Jew in human form so that the Jew would not have to be served by beasts. The non-Jew is consequently an animal in human form, and condemned to serve the Jew day and night." - Midrasch Talpioth, p. 225-L.

"Even the best of the Goyim [non-jews] should be killed." - Abhodah Zarah (25b)T

It was these ancient genocidal attitudes that enabled the Soviet Union's overwhelmingly jewish secret police butchers to exterminate 9 million Ukrainians by starvation in the early '30s - BEFORE Hitler came to power in Germany.

We've all had "Hollowcost" horror tales shoved down our throats all our lives - but have you ever seen even ONE "Shindler's List"-type movie exposing jew guilt for the massacres of communism? Of course not. That's because jews control Hollywood.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Abscheulich

Ich schreibe ihnen auf deutsch, obwohl sie die Sprache wahrscheinlich nicht verstehen, aber ich bin Italiener und als solcher schäme ich mich für das Kommentar des Halb-Italieners vor mir. Ich hoffe für das Wohl ihres gesunden Menschenverstandes, dass sie nur die Leser irgendwie schockieren wollten und scharf auf eine grosse Anzahl Kommentare waren. Auch erotisch gesehen, ist die Story Null wert. Aber ich freue mich, dass die meisten Kommentare von US-Lesern Razzismus und Krieg verabscheuen und bin mir sicher , dass auf dieser Welt die Mehrheit (aber wie lange noch) aus solchen Menschen besteht, sonst hätte sich die Menschheit schon vor lanfer Zeit selbst vernichtet.

Auf ein nimmer wieder lesen.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Mildly amusing in a meta sense

The keying at the end was a nice touch. Frosting on the cake of the protagonist's characterization.

If you're trolling for indignant comments, you're doing so masterfully.

roticwizardroticwizardover 17 years ago
Decent to say the least

I like the description of the sex, and the things that lead up to it. A little too bitter with the hatred; but to each his or her own.

Guess i see that sort of thing being a heathen athiest and nonbeliever.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
unbelievable

I really liked most of your other stories, but this is the greatest bullshit I read in a long time. You are not insulting us Germans with this stupid and primitive, hate-filled story: you are insulting all yews and you are embarrassing yourself.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
If you're gonna do this touchy subject, at least

make the parts with sex hotter and nastier.

Personally I think the reviews show an overreaction. It's fiction, a short story, and the author can write about a character who hates any group if he wants. Save the prosecution of hate crimes for people who actually commit them in real life, they deserve to get whatever punishment comes their way. But this is creative writing, and the abusive comments coming the author's way sound like restriction of freedom of speech more than anything else. Wow, talk about being over sensitive. It's a freaking story, a fake story, as in made up, not real life. This type writing, fiction, gets the same pass as professional comedians. That pass being if you get mad over it, it says more about you than the author or creator.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Where's the next installment?

I liked it. I am not Jewish although I admire them for what they have accomplished in the few years since they became a nation. The supposed taking over of other country's property when they are the one's who were attacked and when they won thru outlandish odds kept the spoils of war and then were demonized for it. Bravo,scouries. Be true, B.

asiaprofasiaprofover 17 years ago
Very intriguing social comment

about the mindset of the Jewish race,

highlighted in an erotic context,

which leads them to commit genocide

against the Arabs for over 50 years now

confident of full Anglo-American backing

in a complex mix of petroleum gluttony

and modern-day versions of the Crusades

killing Moslems across the millenia

such individuals/races cannot be reformed

but can only be eliminated or intimidated

Hitler perhaps did not go far enough

and a few dozen more 9/11s are needed

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
antisemitism

the antisemitism in the present comment makes me sick

Forsaken OneForsaken Oneover 17 years ago
....

Wow.. a whole lot of very strong reactions here.

Personally, I aint jew and i aint german.

From what i've read below:

Jews killed a whole lotta people.

Germans killed a whole lotta jews.

Teh Arab nation is (obviously) at war with Israel.

And i still don't care. I'm voting a 100 just to piss all those who got offended by the political theme. Here's a thought: if the author warned you about the content and you still read it, its your fault.

Aside form the guy who said a few more 9/11s are needed... I'm really amused by everything thats been writen here.

The comments that is - i didnt get a nice woody from the story. The story is nicely writen though and not bad.

NookiehunterNookiehunterover 17 years ago
The Master of Tail

The professor is clearly a master of the art of chasing tail and the sisters are experts in the art of spreading their legs and getting fucked. They found each other and the expected things happenned. Why is it that I don't really think this is a very sexy story?

Nookiehunter

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
bad taste!

if u r trying to encite ppl here ur doing a great job. i think this story is a degrace for u personally, not to mention jews and germans - or both! (yes there r german jews! i am one for example!)

this story is of very bad taste and makes me wonder where the lite censors kick in if not here...

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
well down Scouries, fuck those hairy german cunts

As a black man who worked in Germany, I can fully understand what you are talking about. The Germans have this arrogant supremist attitude, and not just against blacks, but also against other whites. The only way to wipe it out is to fuck German women and knock them. Give them the WURST!!! My only regret is that I only left 23 brown babies in Germany.

I liked the Mechanic Story and this one was wild. Your one crazy motherfucker. I like reading your stories. And I like that you keep switching your race around. In one story, you are an Italian, in the next you are a jew. Its funny to notice how the white readers always react with this internal, white on white racism.

I always used to think crackers were just crackers, but its funny to see that some whites get pissed when the Jew or the Italian white boy gets the blonde pussy.

Mr. SCouries, keep writing this hard dick shit and getting the pussy, and if you need help, I will assist like Scottie Pippen.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
From the 2nd Generation of Holocaust Survivors

A good MC story; I liked the 'revenge' part, although the 2nd generation of survivors (their children) generally don't go for revenge quite that way ...ha...

The keying of the car was real common back in the 60s and 70s. Very accurate.

The writing itself was very good, very descriptive. Excellent skills. Id like to see more. (Maybe not so much ass).

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
hell ya

for all those who say the jews have started the racism

look at history in the past 2000 years there hasnt been a nation so abused, badly treated & condemnd so much

and for all those who say the jews started the arab-israli

conflict take a look at your history books who was meeting with hitler in 1938 no it wasnt the jews

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Erotic shouldn't demonize specific countries

Hello, i like many of your stories and enjoyed most of them very much, but i must say that i disliked this story. Not because of bad writing style or something like that, just because it's inaccurate and instigating political message.

In my opinion it does not help the erotic and also not the understanding between people around the world. As a half french/half german young woman myself, with many victims on both sides in my own family, i must say that the story even upsets me somehow. I have relatives of all colours and religion beliefs in my family, onto 3 continents. Iv'e been to about 17 countries (not as tourist) so far (hey and i am only 20 yet^^) and must say that the germans that i've met were not better or worst than anyone else i met around the world. It just don't draws and accurate picture of Germany.

Ok :) I'll try to give some constructive feedback too. I like your creativity in your stories PLEASE continue with that. Keep fantazing about such things and please share it in form of a story with us :) And personally i would like some more "from behind" action in the stories ;) And maybe the males a little bit more dominant over the females hehe. But that is just my personal likely :)Good luck with your further stories :))

P.S Sorry for my bad english ( I keep tryin to improve it :) )

P.S.S Ah, and sorry again that i write with anonymus..i forgot my account name somehow X_X

Greetings

Laura

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Below your par

I read and liked most of your stories, but glorifying racism in which ever direction is not something I can see in any positive light. Preaching hate does not make the world any safer or better, but only darker and colder. I think the condemnation of racism is worthwhile. Respect and tolerance are so much more constructive and helpful than hate.

I would not blame any victim for being weak enough to take revenge on their tormentor if given the chance. I say weak because I believe that once its done the avengers life will be changed by it. But on the tormentor's kids, grandkids? Or the grandkids of that person's countrymen? Even more removed, its not the victim, but the victim's descendants. Where do you draw the line between revenge and baseless hate that just keeps an pointless conflict going? The owner of the Mercedes might be a US WWII veteran who is just not blindly hating a nation for the deeds of their grandfathers and appreciates a fine car.

Furthermore, I wonder what you were thinking to mix up the holocaust in a sex story in the first place. You are much to organized and meticulous to not have considered and planned this story, but this is not a political website. The only thing you accomplish by this is to divide the literotica readers. As another comment states, one can easily swap nationalities about and have a new hate story. There are just so many conflicts, wars and religions out there that you cant help but alienate someone if you casually trample over one. Considering you intelligent, I can not help but wonder if you are anti-semitic yourself and want to rouse people up against Jews with the behavior of your protagonist.

Ms.RotfeuerMs.Rotfeueralmost 17 years ago
Mmm German Chicks

You got me with the title. I was disappointed in the end though. More sex with more German hotties. In the eternal words of Lew Zealand from the Muppets "hey man just play the gig, don't get involved in politics". I can understand it's thought provoking and has certainly boosted response but I disagree with only having two females as I said, more with the german hotties. Oh and he didn't pinch his wife's jewish bum. That would be a nice touch.

job1940job1940over 16 years ago
Less than your best

Racism is not my bag. Sex was good, but the mean spiritedness made for an unpleasant story. You need to give serious consideration to getting an editor who knows something about pronouns and the need to use proper pronoun cases, e.g. I is a subject (nominative case) and "me" is the objective case. "I touched her, but she stroked me" is correct but "she stroked I" is not only bad grammar, but it does not roll from the lips smoothly.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
your racism sucks.

The idea of your story is sick and gruel. If you want to blame people today for deeds of the past when even our grandparents were children, you are terribly mistaken. What about native Americans, slaughtered to make room for the glory of the United States? You must be mentally ill, even more as you seem to get sexually aroused while thinking of six million people dead. Fuck yourself.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Uncalled For

History is not your strong point and neither is politics,stick to what you appear to do best writing[albeit sometimes lurid]sex stories.This site is for erotic stories,or didnt Scouries know that?

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
awful!

omg get ur facts straight first of all... the term fraeulein (not fraulein!) hasnt been in use in germany since around 1968! as young women, whom this term used to address, felt offended by it - since its not feminine in german.

also ur prejudice and racism sucks big time! i am kind of surprised literotica even let u post this - simple awful!

BazzzBazzzover 16 years ago
Interesting story and reactions

First on the level of how the story was written this was pretty good. It was sexually hot and that's primarily what this site is about. Yet as has been pointed out by quite a few other commentators there are a few historical discrepencies and other mistakes. I believe that these errors should be taken into account when writing a story that partially or fully structures itself on these facts.

Second, with regards to the comments there are plenty of mistakes as well, how unusual. These mostly non writers will flail away with just about anything in a comment. For instance I don't think this was a racist story in that you state you are of German dissent yourself just a different religion. Yet it is quite bigoted though and if you want to write that here well that's your decision.

I did enjoy your biggest mistake though. At the end of the story you landed in Miami and mentioned that you keyed a Mercedes Benz. Hmmmm, I wonder if you simply damaged one of your own's autos? I mean let's get seroius. Who is driving Mercedes Benzes down in Miami? The Irish Catholics? Not likely.

Don GrampaDon Grampaabout 16 years ago
GOOD !!!

You gave ample warning at the beginning of the story that the content would not appeal to everyone. I read it anyway, and agree with those that liked it. I'm old enough to remember WW11 and the persecution of the Jews. It is my opinion that an erotic story should be rated on how juicy or hard it makes you, not on the values or political correctness that you the reader subscribes too.

MylesTMylesTalmost 16 years ago
Disturbing

Yes, I agree that you warned us before reading but I can't help but be disturbed. I certainly hope no one advocates punishing a race for generations after they commit a crime....after all, that's what anti-Semitic is based on and that kind of attitude is just as bad as the one that Hitler had. I'd hate to see what the character in the story would have done in a position of power like Hitler. I can just see the lines of Germans headed into the gas chambers.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
About historical discrepencies and other mistakes

About historical discrepencies and other mistakes, The Germans did killed six milons of Jews and twenty milons of other people including three milons my Polish countryman which are btw almost always forgotten when talking about nazi war crimes; but the point is that modern Teutons are sorry... for the fact that they had lost the wars, they hate USA and UK becouse of it and not for the Iraqi war as they claim. Their attitude towards foreigners no matter white or not is acuretly portrayed in this story and the antisraeli comemnts made in new popular in EU PC "antizionist" spirit are only walidating the autor point about Huns still being closet antisemites.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
What Race is the man in the story?

"Jewish" is not a race. Instead, Judaism is a religion. If you ask me my race, I will not say "Christian", or to be more specific, "Protestant". Was the person German, Polish, Russian, or Israeli perhaps? Using the term "Jewish" as a race in the US has become popular, but is not accurate. Ask your Rabbi, if in fact you are even a Jew.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
god damn warn us better next time

you gave us some warning but damn that was a disturbing and sick story. it was more focused on hate instead of love and sex. i didnt like that story at all

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Pay backs a bitch!!

As a Jew, it makes the story that much more satisfying. Great description of the sex scenes and in setting the professors mind set. As always with your stories, great job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Just Shut the Fuck Up

read your story do not agree with it perfectly ....but what the fuck its a story.....I acctually sat here and read 5 fucking pages of comments on it so I thought i would add to them

1. you warned us ...and thats the big one...it was there plain as day POLITCAL THEMES.....if these assholes did not want to read about it 1 stop reading when you get to a part you dont like .....2 dont read it to begin with .

2 yes the story was a bit racist.... but as i said before it was a story ...and while it was somewhat racist in content it is more of a revenge story ...how many of those have we seen in Nonconcent/reluctance

the thing that boggles my mind is why do people feel the need to comment on these stories so negativly.... and here is a good question ......if you start to read the story and dont like it why do you keep reading ...is it just to find more crap to make comments about ...get a FUCKING life...and let it be

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
One of you worst ever stories

not sure what you are trying to say here - but you failed miserably - extremely bad writing - totally out of character - you obviously harbour a deep resentment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
I really don't give a damn,

He can knock up as many of the "so-called" master race as he wants. I think Thor & Odin would be right there, saying, "Knock 'em up, knock 'em up, knock 'em WAY up" until he knocks up as many as they killed in the war. Tit for tat, y'know.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Nasty but Nice..

Well this got me hard as a rock, and I fucking loved it. The golden daughters of the master race receiving a double dose of thick Semetic dick in cunt and arse. Nubile Aryan goddesses cavorting naked with a hairy, lusty old satyr - hefty circumcised cock cleaving tight youthful pussies and spurting steaming cum into even tighter virgin asses. The exploitative, unwilling, and racial dimensions give it a real frission. Well done!

ChucksSiteChucksSiteabout 14 years ago
I'm having some trouble in writing a comment afer reading 45 others on this....

19th day of April, 2010. My mom advised me not to comment on religion or politics and most of the other comments came from folks who obviously did not get the same sage advice. But mom didn't tell me not to comment on sexual stories or advise me not to enjoy sex, and so, for many years I have both enjoyed sex and talking about it. More recently I found Literotica and thoroughly enjoyed all of Charles Petersunn's long, detailed sexual fantasies and am now enjoying Jim Scouries shorter, interesting erotic journeys into incest/taboo topics, my favorites. I like his stories, and this is a good example of a well put-together theme and characters who fit the situation, and it fuels the imagination, exactly what this erotic fiction is meant to do.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
...

You do realize that the first several hundred thousand Jews who were killed and hurt during the Holocaust were German, don't you? You can't blame the country itself for what the people and the government did two fucking generations ago. I'm not saying that what they did was right, not in any way whatsoever, but you can't continue to hate everyone in that country because of something that happened sixty years ago, especially since they are taught even more than we are in their schools why it was a terrible thing and how to avoid it ever happening again...I know many Jews who have no problem with the current German people. Just please think about the fact that they have no control over what the people of their past did, just as Americans have no control over the fact that generations ago we killed thousands of Native Americans and kicked them out of their rightful land. What's in the past is in the past, and hating the current generation for it does nothing to help bring peace into the world and stop things like that from ever happening again.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

Good story except for all the German bashing. I don't know if the author actually thinks this way or if it was just for the story's sake. I hope it's the latter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
absolute shite

The hateful stereotyping and abuse of Germans ruins any potential merit the story might have.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
jewish fairy tale

feeble jewish fantasy. doesn't really happenlike that does it?

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Those who choose to ignore history are doomed to repeat it.

"Nuff Said!

SouthernCrownSouthernCrownabout 13 years ago
it was a decent piece of fiction

i enjoyed the story pretty well but didnt like all the outragous number of kids or the mind control. though, it does make me laugh nearly every negitive post on this site is all anonymous. but, dont get me wrong jim i really enjoy your writing style.

PolyLvrPolyLvralmost 13 years ago
Meh

Not one of your best stories. I liked it though because the angle was unique. It's hard to write a new story these days.

I'll leave all the bombasting to others even though they only have half a clue what they're talking about.

That's really irrelevent though in the context of a work of FICTION with a FICTIONAL protagonist and FICTIONAL victims.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
nice

you have to continue this story maybe he will get to know one of his german daughters

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Two Better Than One

Two frauliens are so much better than one, and isn' t revenge sweet?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
boring

and made me puke. why bring politics into sex?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
why

Why do you have to bring old hatreds into this? And even so, why teach his American daughters to hate - anyone at all? Why the destruction of property? Why the anal brutality, why waste his potent essence in their bums?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Arrogance

Loved it. Most Germans are still arrogant. Fuck em!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

I wanted to see them enjoy it, not get raped!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
German Girls

If true, I wish you could make monthly trips to Germany and impregnate thousands of those relatives of the bastards who tried to destroy our brothers and sisters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
political hatred

He is as bad as the Nazi's. They were anti-semitic, he is anti-germanic. Even though it has been over a generation since that war. Even though most Germans, though still proud of their ancient heritage, feel the stains of Hitler's reich. Unlike Americans, they walk the streets of their cities and towns and still can see where houses and businesses have had to rebuild after the bombings. Hitler's bunkers, rocket factories, anlantic wall. The remains are still there. Think all they did was persecute Jews? Hitler took everything from the German people to fuel the war on the eastern front with Russia. He was up against a man as insane as himself in a vast country so far away that he couldn't get supplies and reinforcements to the troops fighting battles he ultimately couldn't win Thank God. But your character is spewing the same hatreds 70+ years later. Be careful what you write. People will fall for the printed word whether it is true or not. They will believe it. I don't like this. Your character wasn't part of the War. His parents escaped it and didn't discuss it with him till later in life. It is old history that shouldn't be repeated. And he is teaching innocent little girls, his daughters, to hate all things German also.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Trash

This is just as xenophobic and twisted as any garbage spoken by a Neo Nazi. Rape and forced impregnation is deplorable under any circumstances, and I find it sickening that anyone would write garbage like this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Mercedes Benz

Twice during my times of younger days I lived in Miami. Plus residing in Jewish communities various times. I always wondered why Jews purchased a Mercedes auto, especially knowing they were murdered by Germans. That question still tops my list of unanswered thoughts about people and their ability to keep some things hidden from their sharp minds. I also found time to give a couple of Jewish girls a fat tummy. Such is life when I read this story and find it matches my own thoughts about a certain part of the human race.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Phallus

I liked your work until I read this. Any attempt to get entertained by references to the Holocaust is the work of a stupid mind. The main character written here who reminds another generation of Germans that their grandparents did these things is just wrong. They'll not be allowed to really forget, anyway. The monuments to the National Socialist Movement are still there, all over the country. But we don't have to write stories that make it sound ok to keep persecuting them. And your Jewish character is just as bad, in his own way, as the stupid old men who perpetrated these crimes to begin with. This is not about sex, erotica, mind control, or even race. This is simply about hate.

roveroneroveroneabout 7 years ago
Whew!

Probably the darkest story I've ever read on this site....

The word depraved comes to mind...curious about the back story that caused you to write it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Yes

God bless. Never forget.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
ooops

nope ... didn't work for me.....

EugeneSelfishEugeneSelfishabout 5 years ago
It's just fantasy folks

This story is little different from thousands in the Interracial Love category. Indeed, it could easily have been placed in that category (though I appreciate that this kind of story definitely fits the 'taboo' part of the Incest/Taboo category to a tee). Just like BDSM and Non-Consent/Reluctant, one doesn't need to endorse the fantasy in order to get a kick out of it. It's just a fantasy. People read murder mysteries; doesn't mean they condone murder!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

The fuhrers spirit lives within this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Nauseatingly inaccurate

I get tired of political propaganda being pawned off as erotic literature. Your story accurately shows how vile jews truly ARE! How racist and what liars they are, since six million (well christian men DID, certainly not cowardly jews!) DIDNT die, as red cross records clearly show and Auswitz acknowledges. This fat, hairy fuck is despicable for his motives, his beliefs, and his actions which all cry out "inferiority complex"! Germans ARE a master race, ESPECIALLY compared with jews. Save your bullshit propaganda for your lying jewish family. The world knows the truth and your crappy story wont change it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

This may be fiction but you have to question the sort of person who would write something like this. They haven't posted anything in along time so perhaps there in prison somewhere.

Clarissa72Clarissa72about 4 years ago
Really ppl??

Anon why are YOU so angry? It’s a fictional story....geez!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I read this and find I don't give a damn about the author's motivation. I am just thinking about the fact that everything in entertainment today is race based and I can't get away from it even 16 years in the past.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

What a bunch of anti semite cunts. Germans deserve every vituperative comment and nasty story they get.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Racist nonsense

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I don't get vandalizing the Mercedes.

It's owner wasn't a Nazi, he/she might even be Jewish. I knew a guy whose father in law was Jewish and drive a Mercedes.

I have two Mercedes, my father bombed their factories in the war...no correlation between a new car and something that happened 80 years ago.

Are you going to vandalize some Hippy's Subaru because its parent firm built fighter planes for imperial Japan and their genocide in Asia and mistreatment of allied PoWs?

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