All Comments on 'Freckles'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Unique and interesting, well done.

Seems so well written, but then I was so engaged in imagining how to count freckles, I probably can't remember anything else. Unique and fun. Thanks.

Posy_ChurchgatePosy_Churchgateabout 7 years ago
More sex please!

It was a little too much hypnosis and not enough sex, although the trance-induced state is very well written.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Wrong Tense

I am disappointed that stories have to written in this tense. It seems unnatural

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

You write this sort of story so well, I enjoy every single one of them, and you're my #1 author on this site. Keep up the good work :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

His eyes must be pretty dry at this point.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Excellent something I could totally get into.

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