All Comments on 'Free at Last Ch. 04'

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kmillerk1kmillerk1almost 9 years ago
Ok very disappointed

THAT'S IT???????????

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
disappointing

Just sat and read through the story to get to this ending.

It was building nicely and then you just ended it, such a waste.

baikalisanbaikalisanalmost 9 years ago
Omg

That totally cannot be the end. Give us an epilogue or something!

devilsxkeeperdevilsxkeeperalmost 9 years ago
.........

You are a great writer but this last story was just to much of a cliche and ended way too fast

pokefannerdpokefannerdalmost 9 years ago
Pretty good ending

I'm just glad Nikolai didn't die!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Okay...

I really liked this story...literally a favorite of mine! But please can you add or re-write to this chapter because it shouldn't end so fast! I like the idea of a stabbing but some more romance and love could be included! Great work though?!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I very much enjoyed this story, although it ended in a blur. I’m just glad Nikolai and Ana didn’t die. I like HEAs. Great writing!

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