All Comments on 'Free-Hand Drawing'

by JadisCarroway

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Deep!

But a good message, well done!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Wonderfully crafted

How refreshing it is to read such a beautifully crafted story where unlike many bdsm stories, the end was not blatantly obvious from the outset. I thoroughly enjoyed it. There are a small number of gremlin grammar, spelling and typo mistakes that are begging to be fixed to make it even better.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Wow. An exceptionally vain and unlikable protagonist/ narrator. Congrats.

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