All Comments on 'Free Universal Carnal Knowledge Pt. 01'

Great start. Can't wait for the rest.

I read all 6 parts and gave my feedback on the story so far in my feedback for part 6, but felt I would give some feedback on each part.

I feel you did a great job setting the scene and giving a good description of the characters.

You handled the "why would the character take such a risk in drinking the potion" very well. This could easily have been poorly written, but you wrote it very well.

This part sets up the story for the later parts very well.

You should be proud of how well you wrote this introduction part. It was not an easy writing task.