All Comments on 'Free Use Ch. 01: Meeting the Staff'

Why second person tho.

The use of second person is very distracting. Other than that, pretty interesting.

Additionally, I'd like to see a little more exposition - what exactly is going on in this free-use alternate dimension that makes all this make sense? What are the rules surrounding who can be taken by whom? What is the legal status of women in this society? Are they full citizens, second-class citizens, or property? And what about spouses and breeders? Are spouses/breeders treated differently? Finally, what technology do they have to prevent women from become used up, injured, or broken down unnecessarily?

Agreed that second person is distracting and unhelpful. Ditto for spelling and grammar errors.