All Comments on 'Free Use Sim'

This really turned me on. Well written story. Would definitely like more parts :D

Please write more to this story! So glad I stumbled upon this. Excellent ideas and dialogue and narration. Reminds me of something I might write, right down to the specific fetishes (like being into the whole bored/carefree/no big deal thing). WRITE MORE!

Very good. I'd love to read more, especially if it becomes more public.

I've actually already written like 100k words and submitted 3/4 of it to CHYOA. Just couldn't be bothered editing the formatting for this site. I'll get around to it one day.

If you're the person who just send an email in reply to my comment here, know that as you did it anonymously it was impossible to respond (except by leaving a comment here)! :P If you want a proper reply I can give you one but you'd have to do it off Anon, so I can email back. Glad you liked my story, anyway (if the email was in fact from you)!

Small things like 'your' vs. 'you're,' and the occasional comma missing

Yeah, and there's the way I structured dialogue and swapped tense; lots of problems in my first one. Honestly, if I could edit it, I would, but that's not an option on this site.

Please continue this

Right up my alley, very hot fantasy material.

Is that it?

Post more, this is just what I was looking for!

@anonymous

For the Sim stories? I think so. But free use in general? No, I've got literally 30k or more words written in my idea folder that I need to clean up into actual stories but just haven't found the time. Probably won't be posting to lit though, one of my stories has been pending for like half a year.

Interesting concept. There's a slight dampening of the eroticness, knowing everything is a VR sim and not "real", but on the plus side, you can pretty much resolve any and all potential plot holes with it.