All Comments on 'Freedom From a Small Town Ch. 01'

Really like your story. Couple of nitpicks: when you win something you've "won" it not "one" it. Did you change the name of Tim Smith to T Stout halfway through? These are just proofreading errors. When you got to Miss Simmons it soared.

Keep it up!

esl

nice slow start..then the kicker right at the end...

can't wait for the next part.

Wood that is a wonderful story. You are such a good writer. Thanks for putting it up and sharing it. Looking forward to reading more about them and their journey.

Nice. Very Nice. Being a former small town boy myself, cannot wait for more.

you are as big a tease as your slutty teacher! After doing a wonderful job of setting everything up, it is a great disappointment that there is apparently going to be no follow through.

So does the Journey continue? I sure hope so. I really enjoyed this so far. Old story, new approach.

Good story. Looking forward yo the next part.