All Comments on 'Freeing the Inner Slut'

by voluptuary_manque

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tendermindholestendermindholesover 12 years ago
A wonderful start.

I enjoyed the internal struggle of your protagonist, and the almost "Stepford Wives" thing that's going on. It keeps the feel of the medical/mc fetish, without being so outlandish it's not sexy anymore. It was well written, and had a good flow- I'm looking forward to reading your other/further works. Five/Five.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
LOVE IT

PLEASE WRITE MORE LIKE THIS!

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