All Comments on 'Freemount High Ch. 01'

Sounds like it could have potential. I understand some works start out slow, but this isn't titled ch. 1, even though it's seems likeit is.

What a boring story, needs a lot of help!!

the worst story i have ever read;you need help ;

All I had to read was "narrow hips and DD breasts" to know this was a loser.

Keep it down guys, this was only the introduction, you can't expect to very interesting.

I hope you keep writing and won't let this become a story like "Week 1, Class 1" by FunDareGuy.

Where's the rest of the story dumbass? Good start, but this should never have even been posted.

Good start,you should continue.my pussy is all wet and horny!