All Comments on 'Freezeframe'

It is interesting how you built upon the very storyline of the British movie: Cash Back.

on your first story to Lit. It was a really interesting story and I enjoyed reading it. I look forward to reading more from you especially after reading you BIO.

Again I want to congratulate you on being a now published author, way to go!

I work out at a GYM, wish I could freeze time :) Thanks for writing your first story for our enjoyment.

I've only recently started reading on this site, and this is the most interesting story I've read :) Please continue writing :)

Not quite good enough to favorite, but still good enough to give five stars. I'll be looking forward to what you write next.

(Because I ought to give at least some criticism, I'll say that the ending seems a little pat. I'd have liked to have seen this guy suffer a little more for his redemption. Still, I think the basic idea is sound.)

That first woman in the store - I was expecting him to place his picture in her pocket for her to find later. Nice story. Like to see more on similar themes.

Taking a large number of ideas from Cashback I see. Perhaps to many?

I agree with Anon. This story is heavily influenced by the film Cashback. You should at least give credit to the film for your inspiration.

Y don't y'all give credit for this amazing work of literature

I did watch Cashback and write this based on my feelings about it. Most of my work is far more original than this, but this was the most concise story I had at the time to post. I wanted to explore that world more and am really glad I did.

Thank you for the remarks on the writing I'm glad it is being enjoyed. I have every intention of posting more work, and hope as many of you read it.

Knott Lynn Hardey.

Possibly the best and emotionally deepest of this genre while still immensely exciting and thought provoking. Very close to the film Cashback. Which came first? This however is deeper.

I really enjoyed it though quite a real feeling of abuse. Probably little different to my own behavior should I be gifted the same abilities....

Love love love this story - best one I’ve read on Literotica, by far!

You are a beautiful writer.....