All Comments on 'French Niece??'

This was an excellent story...well written with a believable premise. Kudos.

Your story had me squirming in my chair...Keep up the good work!!

Loved it, and was very excited about it. i love Daddy/daughter stories and have a Master/Daddy that indulges me this fantasy, even though He enjoys them too Sir. thank You Sir. look forward to reading more of Your stories Sir.

Good story line.

As usual, another of your great erotic writings. Well spun story line, fun to read.

I LIKED ALL EXCEPT THE SISTER COMING TO LIVE WITH THEM AND SHARING THE DAUGHTER .IT WOULD ALSO HAVE BEEN BETTER SERVED WITH HIM AND HIS DAUGHTER (ON THE PILL ) WITHOUT HAVING KIDS.

I disagree with "mais oui...mais non". It is perfect the way it is - especially his own daughter having his child, but also his sister returning to him. Maybe it would have been even better if his sister would have become pregnant, too (again) and if the sex would have been more verbal and explicit.

Maybe next time...

Hermit

Jaime, you do this category so well. Happy Holidays.

Thanks!, Thanks!........Thanks!

This is a pretty good story but the Amelie part is dragged a bit more than is necessary I think. Also the reunion of Mary with Peter would have made the story more exciting. Of course this is my personal feeling. I sure liked the ending as suckling milky breast is always a sure fire turn on.

Keep it up and good luck!!!

Prince

Wonderful storyline, well told. Great characters. I would rate it a six if I could...hell, make it a 10!

Once again....another great story. I haven't had time to read all of them...yet!

Lucky_in_cambridge@yahoo.com

You certainly succeed in your efforts to amuse and to excite. You get me 100%. I sure would have liked a section on Peter straightening out his sister while Amilie was in the room with them.

Please keep up your wonderful efforte

Once again, you excite and entice your readers with your stories and words. Keep up the good work!

A fan forever...

I liked it too much, its the best incest story I have ever read, keep up the good work....

Good story line, would have prefered them to have a lifetime of hot orgies WITHOUT the kids,that's a damper..all n all captivating reading...look forward to others

but some of the french was wrong. anyways; it was steaming hot. i loved it.

Once again you have pulled the plug out of some hard headed people and exposed them to what they really deserve. I just wish you could have filled in the gap at the end, as much as Marie mouth was filled with her daughters milk.

You could also have had Amilie begin her next pregnancy; with her mother aiding in her daughters position to enhance the feelings as her cunt was fulfilled and full filled. jim

This shit sucks..

....as i go down the list of all you have written here on literotica...the stories are better and better...thank you..

Your stories always enthrall and excite me. Would love for you to have expounded on the ending. More detail on the nursing mama.

Dear Author,

Your story is simply amazing - it is erotic, not vulgar. You have the art of making people imagine while reading your lovely text

Congratulations and hope to read more such incidences

Please write to me at saxenars3@lycos.com

Sanjeev

Your stories are amazing! everytime i read them i find myself drawn in, imagining every detail that happens. your descriptory phrases are outstanding, the plots are incredible. I cant wait for you to keep writing!

BigBrutha@Mchsi.com

-Cj

I think a Follow-up to see if Marie and Amelie have More Babies and How it all works out.

Very Good

One of my all-time Literotica favorites. Bravo.

derogatory, snide remark that follows this fine writer and then on 11/09/07, there it was, the knock-down from Anonymous (who else but the chicken ass-hole who hides behind a No-name). Now with my perfect 5 vote, it's 25 of 26 who like it a lot vs 1 who feels the necessity of throwing brickbats at every Scouries offering. The story line here was evident from the beginning but erotic in its unfolding and fun to read. And, in the reading comes, as noted in the comments, alternate directions for the story to proceed. But that's the beauty of erotic porn (and any good story) to leave the reader wanting more and with the vibrant imagination to fantasize various plausible endings. Maybe adding more as suggested by some would lessen the interest in this story; maybe we'd best go on to the next one and thank Literotica for allowing this gifted author to pleasure us.

another great stoty ....smiles..never stop ..the read...(karma Dahl) absolutely loves what you write...

Your work is very good, very well written. I enjoy reading writers who take their time and genuinely craft a story.

P.S. I'm looking for the French Niece part 2.

yeah i really like the way your sick mind works , haha

so far i havnt found a single one of your stories i havnt enjoyed but i am partial to the incest stuff lol

I will say, This was a truely enjoyable and interesting story.

What I loved about your story first of all was that the title seems to make little sense until you reach the end and find out the twist about his relationship to Amelie. Second is his sister's struggle to submit to her sexual desire for domination by her brother.

You never disappoint me. Delicious!

would love to read more on what happens in this story

CONTINUE MR SCOURIES

Master/slave gave it a nice sexy twist to the story. Way to go - keep it up . Sorry the double meaning :)

Another great story Jim, loved the domination of the sister and although I saw the niece/daughter twist coming it was no less enjoyable for it. Another of your stories favourited, the list just get's longer and longer and I look forward to your new submissions starting to appear now your illnesses are more controlled. I always skip to your list of stories when I need to be entertained as I know I will always find something more than just titillation in the well thought out plot lines; I have never found a bad or even mediocre one amongst them and I am sure I never will. I especially appreciate the humour you write with; it makes the stories flow so much easier when my smiles are elicited by more that just eroticism. Thanks for all the pleasure you give.

I was wondering if Amelia might have been a daughter instead of neice. Amelia did not seem bothered about actually being daughter.

I guess I should not have been surprised. Another one of your stories that stars a rapist asshole, I take it that you only write about yourself then?

and it sure sounds like you really captured the attitude of MANY of the French "aristocracy" that those females (I still can't think of them as women) thought they were! A wonderful fantasy story!

Perhaps the French ladies left such an indelible impression on you as being aristocratic and stand-offish because you acted in the usual leering, vulgar, crass way that all Americans do when they arrive in Europe; the French despise the Americans for your vulgarity and low-class peasant attitudes, your knee-jerk, unthinking racism, your massive, self-induced ignorance, and your sheer fucking arrogance.

The author's limited experience of the French (or indeed any other part of the world) shines through, pointing up the old adage; write what you know about, and neither of you know fuck all about the French, him because he's never been there, and you because you're too vulgar, crass, low-class, and well, American, to have ever bothered to understand or appreciate them, for all you claim to have lived there. It was probably quite a knock to your ego that the French ladies didn't find you immediately irresistible just because you're American, hence your attitude

You think the French are arrogant, perhaps you should look in a mirror. I personally find the French to be warm and delightful company, I made the effort to learn French and speak it properly, idiomatically, and I never ever once made the mistake of believing, like you yanks do, that all French women are gagging to jump into bed with me if I waved a dollar bill at them, or because I'm better than them, which seems to be the arrogant attitude most Americans have assumed from their severely limited experience of the world at large.

If an Aussie like me, from the furthest point on the planet it's possible to be from France, can have such a positive experience of the country and its people, why can't an American? After all, you only live a six-hour flight away. Perhaps it's because I'm not an arrogant, ignorant racist...

I have enjoyed most of your stories so far, looking forward to the rest of them. You are busy writing these tales and I along with your other fans, appreciate you time and effort involved.

Yours David Shaw. (shawdavid@rogers.com

His short stories are fun, hot, fun, wild and fun. 5 stars.

"How many children do you want?" This sentence is one of the hottest on this site, given the context.

please continue

Even after all the time that has past, a second chapter would be very welcome !

Rapier

wow

that was something else.

first of all. I feel like there's a complete paragraph or something missing between page 2 and 3.

the sexual tension was rising and rising. something was hinting at some potential between them and then he fucks gloria, he cries? and shes mad/angry with him?

Did I missed the "in-between lines" of that?

I felt like it was hinting at something and hinting and then suddenly without anything they're in love?

they had no sexual act between them and she's suddenly in his room? what? why?

apart from that.

A really great story I must admit. It just confused me there for a second, it didn't click with me at all.

Anyways deserved 5* Stars.

I have been reading these type of short stories for over 40 years and found this one leaving me wanting more. The content was super but the sex descriptions could have been a bit longer. The mother/lover could have come out of her slave roll since she had changed to their way of life. Thanks for a good read. Ron - golfgator1@gmail.com

I feel like the leadup to New Years could have been just a tad longer with maybe more interaction between the two. Just feels like some scenes were missing/cut.

Brilliant!! Absolutely Brilliant!! I swear I could hear Amelie speaking with her accent as I read her lines. I don't need to write anything else. All that needs to be told has already been written in the comments before mine. This should have been longer. This should have had a sequel. I'd give this 10 stars if I could.

Your best story ever please write another part 5 star

Story would have been a 5 if the arrogant independent Dr Mary, sorry Marie, remained in Paris. She spoilt the fucking end by coming over

Just beautiful. Sorry I’ve come so late to your excellent writing.

"I'm your Daddy." Darth Vader would be proud of this quote.

1. Marie shouldn't have joined them. It should have been just those two.

2. The story should have been longer, with Amelie in hospital, screaming in pain as he gave birth to his child.

Dude. It got too crazy when he got his own niece-daughter pregnant. And yes, she’s still his niece, cuz it’s his sister’s kid. The grandchild-daughter-grand niece is gonna a be fucking cyclops! And then he starts sharing breast milk with the little freak! Way too weird at the end there.

But I was bought into the sister and daughter-niece romance that was very hot. Would’ve been even hotter if they found out they were both fucking Peter by accident then had like a blowout fight that turned into an orgy. Then they all moved in together permanently, happily ever after!

Love it!