All Comments on 'Frenemies with Benefits Ch. 04'

oh man!!! AWESOME!

This could be a full length novel I think. Nice plot and you left good ground work for expanding later if you choose to. I don't think these 2 are over, he just needs to grovel a bit and make things right. I'm a woman but I actually understand where he's coming from. I hope she forgives him.

good story. continue please.... :)

how could he not credit her??? oh well...it is your story. next chapter please.... i hope a little longer next time. hihihihi.

OH NOOO!!! I actually feel sorry for him...

If he was a good boss, and a good boyfriend, he should have given her the credit for the work she had done. By taking her credit for his own, he had demonstrated his selfishness and short sightedness. Overall, I love this series and can't wait for the next chapter.

Finally this girl grows a spine! I don't know what she saw in him in the first place (aside from physical hotness ;) ), he always behaved like a total asshole to her. I can only see them end up happily together if he gets a brain transplant... ;)

Excellent.

It was going soooo well. Please have him fix it!! And write faster..you can NOT leave us hanging like this.

You can sure tell the women commentators. LOL I like the storyline, he should have given her credit, even though she is a bitch. Fair is fair. Please fix this one, I am really likin the story.

Im very glad You all seem to enjoy this. I apologize, but the fifth chapter is still coming. I've recently received some negative feedback, and its making me take a little more time. I'm just not happy with ch. 5 yet.

Very good sequel. He certainly had it coming, self-absorbed bugger that he is. But don't overdo his naiveté, SL ('I did it for us').

And what I don't understand are those 'taught nipples'. I've never been able to teach them anything, but I'm only a guy, after all. :D

A nice twist in the story--I just hope you don't make the make-up scene too quick. You've made the characters so realistic (which is great!!) so I hope you don't rush through resolution :)

I'm really enjoying this story!!

well done ! again! and yes, i agree i hope they don't make up too quickly. lets have some DRAMA!!lol

john really should have seen that coming...knowing jennifer's personality as he does, why did he think she wouldnt get mad when he didnt credit her...i dont think john is selfish per se, the both of them just really need to sit down and discuss what they want(she wanted a proposal and he wanted to celebrate his promotion), looking forward to future chapters to see how they overcome these obstacles

Oh John sure screwed up. Everyone wants some acknowledgement of their work and him not sharing the credit is like a kick in the face. I don't think he meant to hurt her, he is just oblivious to how much she was going to be hurt by his actions. He is really going to have to man up if he wants her back.

i want to know what happens!!! this is such a great story!! :) but wow he really screwed up :P

Aw, shit! Doesn't that dumb son of a bitch realize that giving credit where due makes for the most loyal and dedicated employees?

You know, in the very first chapter he thinks he might be something of an asskisser, but he's so much worse. Anyone who takes credit for another persons contribution is a thief...and THAT should be a dealbreaker for any relationship.

Tate is an idiot!

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