All Comments on 'Fresh New Talent'

Crap

You seem to have difficulty counting to three.

You missed it when you didn’t have the girl scoop all of that cum into her mouth. Love the concept. xoxoxoxoxoxo Annette

This was good. My main complaint is that considering it's in the group sex category, having Megan do something with Vivian or the third guy would have made it better/fit the category more. Also, when you do your character descriptions, describing in a way that almost feels like a police report is really jarring. It's telling too much and honestly seems kind of lazy.

I'd love to read about the Megan and Vivian in their first scene after auditions.