All Comments on 'Fresh Out Ch. 07'

by 1DurtyMutha

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Holy Hell

Nooo.. This was a horrible way for a great date night to end. And Brion was coming around too. Poor Neville. Hurry and update I'm freakin out.

geemeedeegeemeedeeabout 9 years ago

I gave this five stars even with that ending. Man, I hope Neville isn't dead. I know every story doesn't have to have a HEA, but dayum.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

What the fuck is wrong with you!!!??? That is the worst ending to a good chapter ever!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Patience...

Young grasshoppers ;)

1DurtyMutha1DurtyMuthaabout 9 years agoAuthor
It's not over yet...

Thank you all for reading. Neville's story isn't over but he isn't exactly "fresh out" anymore. If you wish to continue reading, click my name and read "New Life".

sm1982sm1982about 9 years ago
Awesome build up at the end!

Wow, I'm glad I picked back on this series right after the continuation under a new section was posted. This was a great chapter although unfortunate how Neville and Brion's big date was ruined by a jealous crazy man. Loved the way you showed Neville being gentle with Brion, easing him into bottoming for the first time. I can't wait to read what happend next!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Oh shit! Cliffhanger!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

this made me splurge

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