All Comments on 'Freshers Ch. 01'

by The_Rat_in_the_Hat

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Didn't read it as you spoiled the story when you told readers that Tomy died in a car accident. Killing the main caricture, really bad move.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Alternate timelines ?

At the end of Terri Meets Tommy, Tommy dies and Terri says she never saw Tommy naked again.

However that's not true in Un Sejour Dans Le Sud De La France, which is a continuation of Tommy meets Terri.

Are Terri Meets Tommy and Tommy Meets Terri, a retelling of the same story or alternate timelines ?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Excellent start!

I have been waiting for this new story ever since the last chapter of the French vacation story - and I haven't been disappointed! An excellent start to the new story! Can't wait for chapter two! :)

ag2507ag2507about 8 years ago
Hey Anonimouse

It won't be the first time a character has been resurrected! Even Sheer Luck Holmes! It seems that the story of Beth, Tommy and Terri has taken on a life of its own and the clean up paragraph of a stand alone story has had a disproportionate impact: I suspect the Rat in the Hat won't do that again.

A

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