All Comments on 'Freshman Year at Band Camp'

"...where I could pursue music in my free time."

Proceeds to say they can't wait for color guard. Sorry, but as someone that did band in high school and a big university, i did not know of a single color guard that had to "decide" not to major in music. Flags arent instruments. Yes, they are graceful and take a lot of practice and skill, but don't take knowledge of reading music, let alone playing it.

For a first time story, at least you didn't have him popping her cherry with his cock after finger fucking her as many dumb ass writers would.

No stars to rate so I'll give you three, keep writing and you will get better, did a good job.

Now try a story that develops more slowly...

but still feels authentic.

I am also a fellow band kid, Saxophone during concert season and color guard during marching season. Perhaps that may be a similar case in this story. It mentions that she chose it to combine her love of music and dance. Perhaps she also played an instrument apart from guard

Nice story, a little quick, but I like the premise. I'd love to read the continuing adventures of horny bisexual.