All Comments on 'Freshmen Pt. 01'

by hotmangb

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danchapmanukdanchapmanukover 8 years ago
Great start

Great start, looking forward to more!

Missy10256Missy10256over 8 years ago

Loving it...a little choppy in the action.. I'd love to see more build up and anticipation between the 2 characters...looking forward to part 2

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Love it, love it, love it!

If Sam has blonde downy hair on his legs, can he have the same on his muscular chest? Keep Pete and Sam loving each other as they explore their time together! Write on!

o2byoungo2byoungover 8 years ago
Room-mates huh

It seems these two lads lucked out to be room-mates. Maybe gonna be a really gay year for them.

bryan10095781bryan10095781over 8 years ago
So many possibilities...

Keep up the writing...good start!

johnnyreyjohnnyreyover 8 years ago
Sexy athlete

I'm liking Sam and thinking I'm Peter. Mmmmmmmm yes.

63lsmith63lsmithover 8 years ago
MORE

Very well written, Waiting for more chapters. I agree with all of the comments before this. All I can add is it was a 5 star read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Very well written & an interesting beginning. Page 2? Chapter 2? Please?

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