All Comments on 'Freya Save Me!'

Like it, really well done.

James_Duncan I’m so glad you liked it! Thank you for the kind words and for commenting! 😊

Now that was a great story!

Thank you!

Briliant!

An amazing well written story with so much passion! Great character development!

Gave you 5* even though it is in the wrong category IMO. should have been in Romance.

Thank you so much for your comments! 😊

Wonderful story. Just enough character building, good story, very hot.. Sharp editing. It wasn’t too gritty. More please!

I read a lot of stories here, and yours was just amazing! Wishing you a Happy Thanksgiving as well.

Corky in KC,Mo

You are all so sweet! I put a lot into this story and I very much appreciate your comments. 🥰

Thank you and Happy Thanksgiving!

Excellent! Simply outstanding.

Amazing! Hot as Valhalla ... fucking hot Valhalla.

Your questioning if it was too over the top dark, is a NO it is not. It was a fantastically told story and one well crafted for this winter contest.

Thanks for this excellent work.

Thank you so much!

dmallord - Your comment made my day! Thank you! I’m just starting to get more comfortable with this darker side so I’m a bit apprehensive, but excited to see where it takes me. Thank you for the validation!

Minor nit - "pale" = "light", but should be "pail" = "bucket". Otherwise very well written, and erotic but not ridiculous like some stories.

I cannot believe I missed that! Thank you for catching it. If it wasn’t a hassle to edit on Lit I’d certainly change it. It still might bother me enough to do it anyway. 😅 And thank you for the compliment!

Wow!!! What a fabulous story of love and desire in the depth of winter.

Exceedingly well done!

Brilliant narrative. A cut above most stories here.

Loved it. As others have said, I don't think it was too gritty. Just the right amount. One minor suggestion about the pov shifts. You had a few paragraphs where you change from her inner thoughts to his and then back. I'd suggest separating those into different paragraphs. I found myself rereading a few times because I forgot who you were talking about mid paragraph. Really well written otherwise.

Awesome ‘Beauty and the Beast’-type story. This is now my head-canon for how Gaston died. Also, love the wolf for the wolves pun.

@dttoma927, I'm so happy someone noticed the pun! (There's a couple more, btw) And that would be a fantastic end for Gaston! (Or maybe he ends up in LeFou's sex dungeon until he realizes he's actually been madly in love with him this whole time. You know, either way.)

If only they made such good use of all those live-action remakes

Simply outstanding. Nothing else need be said.